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Something About the Resources Exploitation While some people claim that it is of great benefit to look for sources of oil and gas in some places which are remote and untouched, others argue that it will exert a huge damaging impact on those virgin lands. To my way of thinking, both arguments have their own reasons, which will be discussed in detail as follows. On the one hand, the depletion and exhaustion of resources has become serious bottlenecks constraining economic and social development. So it is imperative for many countries to search for more energy resources to expand their energy supply. In fact, there is no denying that adequate energy supply will bring immeasurable economic benefits. What’s more, the exploration followed by transport service and brain gain may promote the leapfrog development in these remote areas. To some extent, is seems that the advantage of developing the unknown areas does outweigh its disadvantage. On the other hand, when people exploit sources in these places, they will break the balance of nature inevitable if not in a rational way. And once the soil or water is polluted, it’ll poses a big threat to the safety of resident’s living. What’s worse, it’ll cost a lot for the local government to cleanup and recovery. What is known to all is that the oil and gas are nonrenewable -as they are used, they are used up, raising price and limiting further increases in productive. In this case, expanding oil production while turning a blind eye to the long-term development will destroy not only the local creatures but also the future prospects of people all over the world. To summarize, when it comes to weighting the advantages and disadvantages of damaging such areas, I think it does more harm than good. Only if we avoid over-exploitation and use alternative sources like green energy more often can we achieve sustainable energy development.

Jul 25, 2014 2:51 AM

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Something About the Resources Exploitation

While some people claim that it is of great benefit to look for sources of oil and gas in some places which are remote and untouched, others argue that it will exert a huge damaging impact on those virgin lands. To my way of thinking, both arguments have their own reasons, which will be discussed in detail as follows.

On the one hand, the depletion and exhaustion of resources has become created serious bottlenecks, constraining economic and social development. So it is imperative for many countries to search for more energy resources to expand their energy supply. In fact, there is no denying that adequate energy supply will bring immeasurable economic benefits. What’s more, the exploration followed by transportation services and brain gain may promote the leapfrog development in these remote areas. To some extent, is seems that the advantage of developing the unknown areas does outweighs its/any disadvantage.

On the other hand, when people exploit sources in these places, they will inevitably break the balance of nature inevitable if not done in a rational way. And once the soil or water is polluted, it’ll poses a big threat to the safety of local residents/residential living. What’s worse, it’ll cost a lot for the local government a lot for cleanup and recovery.

What is known to all is that the oil and gas are nonrenewable -as they are used, they are used up, raising price and limiting further increases in productive production. In this case, expanding oil production while turning a blind eye to the long-term development will destroy not only the local creatures/wildlife but also the future prospects of/for people all over the world.

To summarize, when it comes to weighting the advantages and disadvantages of damaging such areas, I think it does more harm than good. Only if we avoid over-exploitation and use alternative sources like green energy more often can we achieve sustainable energy development.