How to describe the beauty in east Taiwan?

（I practice to write down which I describe as talking to my community tutor.）

Some travel magazines describe Taiwan as a beautiful place. I think the most fantastic tourist area is on the east coast.

Unlike other attractions, the east coast is less developed, so you can experience a totally different kind of lifestyle there, such as fresh air and natural surroundings. However, along with the growth of tourism, some popular places have seen an increase in noise and human activity. It has terribly changed the pure appearance which existed in the good old days.

So, if one day you have the opportunity to come to the east coast, I recommend you hike into the east or central mountains to enjoy the spectacular scenery, which is 100% non-artificial.
Take a long deep breath, let your lungs embrace the natural air and feel how the terrific mountains have affected to you. Only after this moment, can say you experienced the real east Taiwan.

<em>The last part of this sentence was unclear to me what your were trying to say</em>, "Take the long deep breath, let the lung embrace the natural air as well as the terrific mountain done to you." <em>Otherwise, you did very well using descriptive words and attempting some complex sentences!</em>