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Story 7/26/2014 A cub was brought to the zoo. He was kept together with an old lion. Every day, the zookeeper fed him with banana while the old lion was fed with meat. The cub was baffled, he thought," It could be just because I am still new here. I should not be so calculative." After 3 months, the cub was still receiving banana as his daily meal. He was burning with curiosity, he decided to ask the zookeeper, "hi, sir. I have been here for almost 3 months. Why am I still receive banana as my diet?" The zookeeper answered, "because you replaced a monkey." Luckily the young lion did not received "peanuts".
Jul 25, 2014 4:33 PM
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Story 7/26/2014

A cub was brought to the zoo. He was kept together with an old lion. Every day, the zookeeper fed him with a banana while the old lion was fed with meat. The cub was baffled, he thought" It could be just because I am still new here. I should not be so calculative."
After 3 months, the cub was still receiving a banana as for his daily meal. He was burning with curiosity so he decided to ask the zookeeper "Hi, sir. I have been here for almost 3 months. Why am I still receiving bananas as my diet?"
The zookeeper answered "Because you replaced a monkey."

Luckily, the young lion did not receive "peanuts".

 

-Fed <em>with bananas</em> or <em>fed with a banana</em>

-Don't use a comma <em>before</em> speech marks

-Try and link up to clauses of a sentence with a conjunction and not a comma

-All speech starts with a <em>capital letter</em>

July 25, 2014
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