New technologies A typical question of the english exams in Spain is how are you in touch with your friends and how do you think has changed the new technologies our lives. I think that mobiles are t

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New technologies A typical question of the english exams in Spain is how are you in touch with your friends and how do you think has changed the new technologies our lives. I think that mobiles are the gadgets more important recently to be in touch with people. You can write fast a message and the other can read it in seconds. The actual mobiles have practically the same performance that a computer. You can do videoconferences, take pictures, playing to games, listen music, write things.. Due to the new technologies, people think less than before, every time else, it don´t exist personal relation and they do us to be more comfortable and therefore we are more lazy. Evidently new technologies have more advantages than disadvantages and because of this, they are indispensable for ours lives.

Jul 25, 2014 11:08 PM

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New technologies

A typical question in the English exams in Spain is how are you in touch with your friends and how do you think has changed the new technologies our lives. - En inglés hay que cambiar el orden de las palabras...se dice mejor 'how do you think new technologies have changed our lives?' - have changed porque 'technologies' es una palabra plural.

I think that mobiles are the most important gadgets (solemos usar el adjetivo antes del sustantivo en inglés) more important in recent times (recently significa que esta época ya ha pasado).. to be in touch with people. You can write fast a message quickly and the other person (el otro = the other person) can read it within seconds. The actual current (actual es un falso amigo, y significa 'current' en inglés) mobiles have practically the same performance as a computer. You can do videoconferences, take pictures, playing to games, listen to music - (escuchar música = listen to music) and write things..

Due to the new technologies, people think less than before, every time else,(qué quieres decir?)

it don´t exist personal relation Personal relationships don't exist anymore and they make us to be more comfortable and therefore we are more lazy. - No sé exactamente lo que quieres decir.

Evidently new technologies have more advantages than disadvantages and because of this, they are indispensible for ours lives.

Muy buen trabajo, Pablo! Se puede entender perfectamente lo que quieres decir en general y solo hay que cambiar algunas preposiciones o el orden de las palabras en algunas frases.

Hay una frase la que no entiendo, pero puedes decirme lo que quieres decir para llegar a un acuerdo!

Mucho gusto en conocerte!

Un saludo

Leigh

July 25, 2014

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