Yukiko12
Meeting up friends It was my day off today. I met up my friends and we enjoyed having a dinner and talking each other. It's been a long time since we met last time. So we had so many things to talk each other. When I listen to my friends,Sometimes I am inspired from them. Because there are different character ,experiences and interests between us.
Jul 26, 2014 12:31 AM
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Meeting up <em>with </em>friends

 

It was my day off today. (Or "<em>Today was my day off.</em>")


I met up <em>with </em>my friends and we enjoyed having a dinner and talking <em>with </em>each other.


It's been a long time since we <em>last </em>met last time. so (or <em>and </em>for a more fluid sentence) we had so many things to talk each other <em>about</em>.


<em>Sometimes,</em> when I listen to my friends Sometimes I am inspired from <em>by </em>them <em>b</em>ecause there are different character <em>personalities</em>, experiences and interests between us.

 

Result:

Meeting up with friends

 

Today was my day off. I met up with my friends and we enjoyed having dinner and talking with each other. It's been a long time since we last met and we had so many things to talk about. Sometimes, when I listen to my friends  I am inspired by them because there are different personalities, experiences and interests between us.

 

 

 

Good work!

July 26, 2014

Meeting up friends

It was my day off today.
I met up with my friends and we enjoyed having <em>(no article in this case >>>)</em> a dinner/a  meal together and talking with each other. 
It's been a long time since we last met last time,  so we had so many things to talk over each other.

When I listen to my friends, sometimes I am inspired from by them/get inspiration from them,  
because there are we have different characters/personalities, experiences and interests between us.<em> (this 'between/amongst us' makes an awkward sentence so I rearranged the wording)</em>

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<em>You are unnecessarily starting new sentences with conjunctions - So, Because - you can simply use a comma ',' and continue the sentence.
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July 26, 2014
Although we suggested quite a few changes and corrections, everything you said was perfectly understandable.
July 26, 2014
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