Estelle
My Dream I am a Chinese girl.My dream is studying England one day.Because I love England very much.Why?At the beginning is because I love Harry Potter.Then,I found I love England.My family is not rich.So I must study hard so that I can achieve my dream.To be honest, my English is poor.So can you help me?
Jul 26, 2014 12:43 AM
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My Dream

I am a Chinese girl My and I dream is of studying/my dream is to study in England one day, because I love England very much. Why? At In the beginning it is just because I love Harry Potter. Then I found I love England. My family is not rich so I must study hard so that I can to achieve my dream. To be honest, my English is poor. So Can you help me?

August 4, 2014

My Dream

I am a Chinese girl.  My dream is to study in England one day, because I love England very much.  Why?  In the beginning it's because I love the Harry Potter books.  Then I discovered I love the country.  My family is not rich, so I must study hard so that I can achieve my dream.  To be honest, my English is poor, so can you help me?

August 4, 2014
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