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About my beautiful country Peru Peru, is my country, when i was born, July is an important mounth here, to be exact 28th of July, because it is independence's day. So peruvian people have 3 free days for that reason, we can have a short trip for those days. For example, you can visit MACHUPICCHU, beautiful place, it is considered as a Capital of South America. Despite, I am peruvian, I havent could go to Machupicchu, but next year I will go. Well, what to do in this 3 days?. I and my family are planning to visit my parent, what more?, we´ll go to the book fair to buy interesting book. Any recomendations?
Jul 26, 2014 2:21 AM
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About my beautiful country, Peru

Peru is my country, where I was born.

July is an important month here, and the to be exact 28th of July is specifically important, because it is our Independence's Day.  <em>(Use "more specifically" regarding this one, important day.  Use "to be exact" in something like "He told me his trip was unforgettable!  Well, to be exact, he told me it was unforgettable because it was a disaster!")</em>

So Peruvian people take have 3 free days off for that reason. <em>(I think you can just say "Peruvians."  You can also say "take a 3-day holiday".)</em> 

We can take have a short trip during for those days. For example, you can visit Machu Picchu MACHUPICCHU, a beautiful place.

It is considered as a capital of South America. <em>(Or "considered to be...")</em>

Even though Despite, I am Peruvian, I haven't visited could go to Machu Picchu yet, but next year I will go.  <em>(You can also say "Despite the fact that I am Peruvian..."  I would use "haven't visited" vs. "haven't gone to".)</em>

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Well, what to do during in these 3 days?  <em>("What to do" is a colloquial way of saying "What is there to do...?")</em>

My family and I and my family are planning to visit my parents; what else more?  <em>("I" goes last in a series of subjects.  Note "what else":  "What else do I have to clean in this room?")</em>

We´ll go to a the book fair to buy interesting books.  <em>(There may only be one book fair in your town, but I'd still use "a book fair", no particular one.)</em>

Any recommendations?  <em>(I'm not sure if you're asking for recommendations about which books to look for, or about other ideas for the 3-day holiday; you may want to specify, e.g., "Do you have any other recommendations for interesting vacation activities?")</em>

July 26, 2014

About my beautiful country Peru

Peru, is my country, when i it is where I was born. , July is an important mounth here, to be exact especially 28th of July, because it is Independence's Day. So Peruvian people have a 3 free days holiday for that reason., We can have take a short trip during this time for those days. For example, you one can visit Machu Picchu, a beautiful place, it is considered as a the Capital of South America. Despite being a , I am Peruvian, I haven't been could go to Machu Picchu, but next year I will go.
Well, what to do in this over these 3 days?. I and My family and I are planning to visit my parents, what more?, We´ll go to the book fair to buy interesting book. Any recommendations?

August 2, 2014

About my beautiful country Peru

Peru is my country, where I was born. July is an important month here, specifically the 28th of July, because it is Independence Day. Peruvian people have 3 free days for that reason. We can go on a short trip for those days. For example, you can visit Machu Picchu, which is a beautiful place considered the capital of South America. Despite the fact that I am Peruvian, I haven't been to Machu Picchu, but next year I will go.


Well, what do I plan on doing for these 3 days? My family and I are planning to visit my parents. What else? We´ll also go to the book fair to buy interesting books. Any recommendations?

 

<em>I would also love to see Machu Picchu one day. Enjoy your trip!</em>

July 26, 2014
Thanks, it iS: "LOMO SALTADO". es muy rico, con papas fritas y carne. que bueno que conozcas la comida peruana!
August 3, 2014
Lomo saltado. (¿o salteado?) Ya soy vegetariano pero me encanta ese plato... Hay muy buena comida en el Perú.
August 2, 2014
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