安Ann
So tired Rencently, in order to improve my English, l have added a lot of friends, but l feel so tired. Everyday, l have to answer the same question,such as 'what is you name?', 'how old are you' and so on. Sometimes, l have to face some rude questions. Actually, l just want to improve my English but not make boyfriends or have some unaided small talks. It is really tired, l really have no time to have a small talk, so recentlly l really donot want to log in Skype
Jul 26, 2014 11:42 AM
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So tired

Recently, in order to improve my English, l have added a lot of friends, but l feel so tired. <em>(Great!  You could add a little detail:  "...but I'm so tired of talking about the same things with many of them.")</em>

Every day, l have to answer the same questions, such as 'what is your name?', 'how old are you?' and so on. <em>("Everyday" means "commonplace":  "Seeing my neighbor watering her plants is an everyday activity."  "Every day" means "each day":  "I run in the park every day, without missing a day.")</em>

Sometimes, l have to face some rude questions. <em> (Or "Sometimes I get some rude questions.")</em>

Actually, l just want to improve my English but not make boyfriends or make have some unaided small talks.  <em>("A talk", a conversation or speech, can be countable, but in this case, "small talk" is uncountable:  "My colleague is good at making small talk at parties.")</em>

It is really tiring.  <em>(Adjectives ending in -ing describe something that makes you feel a certain way; adjectives ending in -ed describe you, who feels that way.  "That meeting was tiring!  I was so tired afterward, I took a nap."  "I am so excited about my vacation!  Seeing those waterfalls is going to be exciting indeed!)</em>

l really have no time to make have a small talk, so recentlly l really haven't been enthusiastic about do not want to logging in on Skype. <em>(Use the present perfect with words like "recently", describing the indefinite past:  "Recently I've been thinking a lot about starting an exercise program."  I'd use the suggestion above rather than "I haven't wanted to..." which sounds a little awkward.)</em>

<em>Very well done, Ann!</em>

July 26, 2014
看来我已经稳坐喷神界第一把交椅了。 我的粉丝都来了。······ 维护自身权益? 你准备去315么 朋友
July 26, 2014
Okay,如果你不能为你的粗鲁道歉,那我无话可说。这就是你的生活态度,我无法改变。谢谢参与讨论,你可以尽情评论,而我不会和一个没礼貌的人继续交流,这也是我的权力,但是请不要进行人身攻击,如果你继续攻击,我会反抗,这是维护自身权益,谢谢
July 26, 2014
一开始,我很好奇,是什么文章能有32条评论,就打开来看看,原来又是这哥们。。。
July 26, 2014
小姐无需如此妄自菲薄,你的智商绝对能玩弄别人鼓掌之中。至于绅士风度,我想我从来就不是一个所谓的绅士,而且我也不想当绅士。
July 26, 2014
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