Yuxi Gu
Job satisfaction In modern society, most people spend large proportion of time in their jobs. Therefore, job satisfaction has become a vital condition of individual 's life. There are variety of reasons that influence one's job satisfaction. The first one is salary, which is fundamental to everyone. As we know, adults need to work to earn money to support themselves and their family. The more money they get, the more satisfied they feel about their job. Moreover, the second thing is potential value of the job. Whether this job could improve your skills or ability to solve kinds of problems in practice is necessary to getting more job satisfaction. It not only depends on the process you go through, but also the meaning and experience you learn from the job. Even if you did was not so perfect or complete, you still could feel satisfied with your job. Overall, it's not unrealistic for all workers to improve their job satisfaction by these ways. Although not all the people could feel satisfied with their own job, it still have positive impact on acquire more satisfaction of work.
Jul 26, 2014 2:33 PM
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Job Satisfaction

In modern society, most people spend a large proportion of time in at their jobs. Therefore, job satisfaction has become a vital condition of an individual's life. There are a variety of reasons (number of factors) that influence one's job satisfaction. The first one is salary, which is fundamental to everyone. As we know, adults need to work to earn money to support themselves and their family. The more money they get earn, the more satisfied they feel about their job.

Moreover, the second thing is potential value of the job. Whether this job could improve your skills or ability to solve kinds of problems in practice is necessary to getting more job satisfaction. It not only depends on the process you go through, but also the meaning and experience you learn from the job. Even if what you did was not so perfect or complete, you still could feel satisfied with your job.

Overall, it's not unrealistic for all workers to improve their job satisfaction by these ways. Although not all the people could feel satisfied with their own job, it still have has a positive impact on acquiring more satisfaction of in work.

July 27, 2014
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Job satisfaction

In modern society, most people spend 一个 large proportion 大多数 of 他们的 time 在工作 in their jobs. Therefore, job satisfaction has become a vital condition 性命攸关 因素of individual 's 自己的 life. There are 一个variety of reasons that influences that 可能会导致 one's job satisfaction. The first one is (评论:没有说,“第一是。。。”因为,美国人都平常写,“第一”,如果我们至少列出三个原因。) Salary, which is fundamental to everyone,是最重要的因素。 As we know, adults need to work to earn money to support themselves and their family<<<评论:家庭在妳的英语句子中应该是复数的. The more money they get 人们赚, the more satisfied they 人们 feel about their jobs (复数) . 《《《评论:这种说法是错误的。在第二个“他们”‘的后面添加’有时‘’”

Moreover, the second thing 因素 影响着工作满意度 is potential value of the job "晋升机会"或者”晋升潜力”. Whether this 一个 job could improve your skills or ability 《《(评论:这个单词“ability" 应该是 复数的) to 或者 solve kinds of problems in practice 满足职业目标 is necessary to getting 正在获取=”acquiring/obtaining") more job satisfaction. It not only depends on the process you go through, but also the meaning and experience you learn from the job. Even if you did was not so perfect or complete, you still could feel satisfied with your job. <<<你的人称用错了,因为你在表达一个观点,而不是在教别人怎么做,语气很重要。应该重新写一个,人们该什么什么。

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July 28, 2014
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Job satisfaction

In modern society, most people spend a large proportion of time at their jobs. Therefore, job satisfaction has become vitally important in one's life. There are a variety of factors that can influence one's job satisfaction. Firstly, salary is a big factor, and fundamental to everyone. It is commonly known that adults need to work to earn money to support themselves and their family. The more money one earns, the more satisfied they often feel about their job.

Secondly, and also very important, is the potential value of the job. One must ask themselves whether this job could improve ones skills? Does it enable one to have the ability to solve kinds of problems in practice? Value in ones job, is necessary to obtaining more satisfaction, and thus a meaningful experience. This is found not only in the process one goes through during their employment, but in the opportunities presented to learn while on the job. Even in the jobs that don't always run smoothly there is a chance for growth, therefore one could still feel satisfied with their employment.

 

Overall, it's not unrealistic for all workers to improve their job satisfaction if they view it in this light. Although not all the people may feel content with their job, it still has the potential to provide opportunties that may have a positive impact on their ability to feel satisfied at work.

July 27, 2014
Thanks for your comment. I agree with you that personal decision is also a important factor, maybe I did not come up with that point that time, lol
July 28, 2014
Your English level is impressive. You took into account two variables: money and career prospects. I think a satisfactory work environment is also factoring in one's decision in choosing a particular job or department.
July 27, 2014
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