Barak gaffar
My day My name is Barak. I live in Russian federation. I am doing phd in medicine. I will become after one year a surgeon. Now i have a vocation. When i wake up i brush my teeth , wash my face and hands. Than i eat breakfast and listen to news. After breakfast i call to my mother and ask her work and health . I love very much my family . Than i start study my medical books which i need . During the study i drink green tai and some sweets for getting energy . At 13:00 i eat launch. Than that i rest and listen to music . In the evening i go to the park or to forest for respire fresh air and walk . Near to me there located very beautiful forest . Some times i go to cafe bar with my friends . I have a lot friends . They are very respectable and kind people . When i came to home i chatting with my new friends who i met here in italki . They are vey good people . We help each other for improve our english. Now a little i now other new cultures and tradition . For it is very interesting and i like to have a lot friends from each corner of the world . During the day sometimes i go to the beach when the weather is hot and good. Also sometimes i run in the evening . Sometimes i watch english movies for my english and listen english songs. I like english movies and english music. I want to use this time for skilling my english . I want to learn english very well. I want to speak in english like my native language.
Jul 26, 2014 3:00 PM
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My day

     My name is Barak. I live in the Russian federation. I am doing a phd in medicine. In a year, I will become after one year a surgeon. Now, I have a vocation. When I wake up, I brush my teeth, and wash my face and hands. Than Then, I eat breakfast and listen to the news. After breakfast, I call to my mother and ask her about work and her health . I love my family very much. Then, I start studying my medical books, which I need. During the While I study I drink green tea and some sweets for getting energy . At 13:00, I eat launch. After that, I rest and listen to music. In the evening, I go to the park or to the forest for respire to breath fresh air and walk. There is a very beautiful forest near me. Sometimes, I go to a cafe bar with my friends. I have a lot of friends . They are very respectable and kind people . When I come to home I chat with my new friends, who I met here in on italki . They are vey good people. We help each other for improve our english. Now, I know a little about  a little i now other new cultures and traditions. For It is very interesting and I like to have a lot friends from each corner of the world. During the day, sometimes, I go to the beach when the weather is nice (also, you can say "when it's hot out"). Also, sometimes, I run in the evening. Sometimes, I watch english movies and listen to english songs, to practice my English for my english. I like english movies and english music. I want to use this time for improving my english language skills skilling my english . I want to learn english very well. I want to speak in english like it's my native language. (also, you could say "I want to speak English fluently")

July 26, 2014
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My day

My name is Barak. I live in (maybe you need<em> the</em> here, but I guess you know more than me) Russian Federation. I am doing a PhD in medicine. I will become a surgeon in one year. Now I have a vacation (or <em>I'm on vacation/holiday</em>). When I wake up I brush my teeth, wash my face and hands. Then I eat breakfast and listen to the news. After breakfast I call to my mother and ask her about work and health - I love my family very much. Then I start studying my medical books, which I need (or <em>need to do;must do</em>). During the study I drink green tea and eat some sweets for getting energy. At 13:00 I eat launch. Then after that I rest and listen to music. In the evening I go to the park or to the forest to breathe some fresh air and walk. Near to me there is located a very beautiful forest. Sometimes I go to a cafe bar with my friends. I have a lot of friends. They are very respectable and kind people. When I come to home I chatting with my new friends, who I have met here on italki. They are vey good people. We help each other for improve our English. Now I know a little more about other new cultures and traditions. For It is very interesting and I like to have a lot of friends from each corner of the world. During the day, when the weather is hot and good, I sometimes go to the beach. Also, sometimes I run in the evening. Sometimes I watch English movies and listen to English songs for the development of my English. I like English movies and English music. I want to use this time for improving my English skills. I want to learn English very well. I want to speak English as if it were my native language.

July 26, 2014
Best of luck in your studies! In English, you must always capitalize the I (though, if you use an iPad, perhaps it is not worth the bother:)
July 26, 2014
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