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Weekend For me, weekends are the holiday full of joy because I can get up late in the morning,do everything what I want to do and enjoy the relaxing time. But the happy hours always vanish much faster than we imagine. Next week will be coming after several hours. I went to the cinema this afternoon to see the newly released movie called Continent. It is the first time Han Han, a famous author in Mainland China, acted as a director. Although I am not a book fan of him, I still go to the cinema for this movie. It is a story about travelling experience of three people.They set out from their hometown with their different aims.Jiang He will go to the west of China to continue his teaching path. Hao Han would like to meet his old pen pal. But so many accidents happened during their journey. On the first day of the journey, their another pal called Hu Sheng lost the touch with them. After that, Hao Han met his pen pal and plan to tell her that he loved girl but the reality was that the girl is his half little sister. Finally, they met liar who stole their car and leave them alone. What impressed me most is the actors' lines in the movies. They caught people's eye and caused a big hit on the social media before I watched it. The director told us the vivid and realistic society by these lines with lots of humors. I cannot remember the English version of lines accurately, but I just try to make a translation depending on my memories. They told us, Only child distinguish right from wrong, but adult just care advantages and disadvantages. I heard of many truths, but I am still not able to spend entire life well. At the beginning, you would like to prove their strengths for thousands of people, but you found it was enough to have one person to understand your mind in the end. This morning, my father did some cleaning and noticed that our old steel mailbox full of ads and postcards. I always thought the postcards sent from overseas got lost on the way because of our post, but finally, I got them accidentally. I guess that it might our postman did it by mistakes. Since I joined in the Postcard exchange, I just learnt many things, something may lose, something may get, disappointments are normal but surprises will come as follows, everything is fair,just keep calm and carry on. It is my first time to write so long text.
Jul 27, 2014 12:55 PM
Corrections · 2
Notice my use of the semi-colon (;) in the last 2 sentences. You use it to join a list of ideas , which could be written as separate sentences, to make one long sentence.
August 2, 2014
Congratulations on writing such a long text. I will give you a few corrections. For me, the weekend is a time of joy, the best holiday, because I can get up late in the morning ( or I can sleep in), do everything that I want to do, and enjoy time to relax. Although I am not a fan of his books, I still went to the cinema for this movie (or Film). They told us, only a child distinguishes right from wrong; an adult cares only about the advantages or disadvantages. Since I joined the Postcard Exchange, I have learned many things; somethings may be lost, and others gained; disappointments are to be expected but surprises may follow them, so everything is fair ( balances out). Just keep calm and carry on.
August 2, 2014
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