JAJA... I had a reunion with my family because we have a relation cooperative since 2010. I worked with my mother in her restaurant since 9 am until 18 pm. I am very tiring because today I worked in t

Mai

JAJA... I had a reunion with my family because we have a relation cooperative since 2010. I worked with my mother in her restaurant since 9 am until 18 pm. I am very tiring because today I worked in the kitchen, I prepared the meal for everybody. My stepfather worked with us every day because He did not work today. And he talked me that his car was damaged for that it wased. my mother really was well with regarding her health because yestraday, She was sicken. I am very happy because today My boyfriend gets to travel al 10 pm.

Jul 28, 2014 1:25 AM

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Hi Mai,

Based on my understanding of your paragraph, here is how I would say it:

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Ha Ha.... [Note: If JAJA in Spanish is someone laughing, then it would be "Ha Ha" in English]

I had a reunion with my family because we have had a cooperative relationship since 2010. I worked with my mother in her restaurant since 9 am until 6 pm.

[Note: You cannot combine "regular time" with "military (or 24 hour) time."]

I am very tired because I worked in the kitchen today [Note: better would be "all day"] preparing the meals for everybody.

My stepfather worked with us every day except today because he told me his car was damaged and it was.

My mother felt a lot better today, in regards to her health, even though she had been sick since yesterday.

I am also very happy today because my boyfriend doesn't have to leave until 10 p.m.

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I hope this helps.

- Adam

August 3, 2014

JAJA...

I'd like to correct your essay with wild guessing.

I had a reunion with my family because we have a relation cooperative since 2010.

In 2010, I had a reunion with my family and we are helping each other.

I worked with my mother in her restaurant since from 9 am until 18 pm.

I am very tired because today I worked in the kitchen, I prepared the meal for everybody the guests. My stepfather worked with us every day today because he did not work today. And he talked me that his car was damaged for that it wased(?).
My mother really was well again with regarding her health because yestraday, but she had been sick yestraday.

My mother had been sick yestraday, but today she was well again.

I am very happy because today my boyfriend gets to travel(will return from travel ?) at 10 pm.

I am not a native speaker in English, so let's wait more good corrections.

July 28, 2014

I am very interested in the title, JAJA, of your essay. In Korean, the same sound means "Let's sleep!" or "Hey, Hey." What is the real meaning of the word?

July 28, 2014