"Anna", part 3.

"You're just like everyone else"-,Anna was right.Since my birth, my parents had made me an obedient child.Schoolteachers jealously watched that my "I" did not get out for a general framework.[<em>I don't understand this sentence - it needs re-writing</em>] You've seen a pebble on the beach?Here comes a smooth gray stone, which you have just stepped on.  It was me .....Now I'm ready to take out loans, drink Coca-Cola, listen to pop music and vote for mediocrity.

[Your style is quite lyrical - which is more interesting to read. So it would be good to gain experience of using idioms so that you can express yourself well this way.  Michael]

"Anna", part 3.

"You're just like everyone else"-,Anna was right.Since my birth, my parents made me obedient child.As well as school teachers sandpaper erased the remnants of my personality.You've seen the pebble on the beach?Here comes a smooth gray stone, which you have just stepped on. It was me .....Now I'm ready to take out loans, drink  Coca- Cola, listen to pop music and vote for mediocrity.