Ali
L'aïd el-fitr Hello, today it's aïd el-fitr so i wanted to introduce non-muslims people for them to understand why today is a celebration day for muslims arround them ! As you maybe know, muslims has to fast (not eating or drinking from the sunshine to the sunrise) during a month a year, the Ramadan. During this mounth, we try through this fast to be better people in many differents ways. In deed, we learn to get closer to god learning about religion, closer to people's need and farther from the material and our pulsion. So Ramadan is not just not eating or drinking, it's as well a physical as mental abstention. In this point of vue, it's a hard test for us and we need to use the lesson learnt this mounth the rest of the year, and we try... But it's not as easy as it seems and many difficulties prevent us from focalising on the most important things, so i thing Ramadan mounth is a good reminder for us. Thank you for reading,if you have any question about Ramadan mounth or Islam, i would be pleased to answer you in the best way i am abble to ! And for all the muslims here, aïdekoum moubarak عید مبارک
Jul 28, 2014 9:43 AM
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L'aïd el-fitr Eid al-Fitr

Hello, today it's is aïd el-fitr Eid al-Fitr so I wanted to introduce non-muslims people to it for them to so they can understand why today is a celebration day (or "a day of celebration") for muslims arround them!
As you maybe might know, muslims has have to fast (not eating or drinking from the sunshine sunrise to the sunrise sunset) during a one month a per year, the Ramadan. During this mounth, we try through this fast to be better people through this fast in many differents ways. In deed, we learn to get closer to God by learning about religion, closer to people's needs and farther from the material and our pulsion desires. So Ramadan is not (isn't) just not eating or drinking, it's as well also a physical as and mental abstention. In this point of vue view, it's a hard test for us and we need to use the lessons learnt (American spelling is "learned") this mounth during the rest of the year, and we try... But it's not as easy as it seems and many difficulties prevent us from focalising focusing on the most important things, so I thinkg Ramadan mounth the month of Ramadan is a good reminder for us.
Thank you for reading, if you have any question about Ramadan mounth the month of Ramadan or Islam, I would be pleased to answer you in the best way I am abble to!
And for all the muslims here, aïdekoum moubarak (I've seen "Eid mubarak" in English) عید مبارک

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Great post! The blue marks are corrections and the green are suggestions to sound more native.

A couple things to remember:

1. We always capitalize I in English, unless you're being very informal (like a text message to a friend).

2. A space between the final word and the punctuation (like !) isn't necessary in English.

3. Cognates from French aren't always spelled the same (I have the same problem in French!)

Keep up the good work!

 

July 30, 2014
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