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The summer vacation has started! Today, summer vacation began! Now, I am going to my parents house. They live in Deagu. I go there by train named Mugunghwua. It takes about 4hours from Seoul to Deagu. I read book, watch movie in train. I have a plan to meet with my close friends I haven't seen for a while, and go camping with my family. I really looking forward this vacation.
Jul 28, 2014 9:55 AM
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The Summer vacation has started!  <em>(Just use "vacation" or "my vacation".)</em>

Today, my summer vacation began!
Now, I am going to my parents' house.  <em>(Note the apostrophe after "parents" to denote possession, with "parents' house".  You can also say "I'm on my way to my parents' house.)</em>

They live in Deagu.
I am going there by a train named Mugunghwua. <em>(Use the present continuous, since you're in process of going or traveling.  I'd use "...called Mugunghwua.")</em>

It takes about 4 hours from Seoul to Deagu.
I read a book, and watch a movie on the train.  <em>(Note "on the train" which doesn't actually mean "on top of the train" - it's odd that you don't say "in the train", I know.)</em> 

I have a plans to meet with my close friends I haven't seen for a while, and to go camping with my family.  <em>(Note "to have plans to..."  Good use of the present perfect!  Since you used "to meet", use "to go" in the next clause.)</em>

<em>Well done, practicing those prepositions of place!</em>

I really looking forward this vacation.

July 28, 2014
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The summer vacation has started!

Today, summer vacation began!
Now, I am going to my parents' house. They live in Deagu.
I'm going there by a train named Mugunghwua. It takes about four hours from Seoul to Deagu.
I read books and watch movies in train.

I'm planning to visit my close friends I haven't seen for a while, and go camping with my family.

I'm really looking forward to this vacation.

July 28, 2014
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