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Orange Is The New Black Hi everybody!!! When I decided to learn English I started to watch a lot of TV shows to watch them in English without subtitle, so if I didn't understand something I repeat it until I could understand and if it didn't work I look for the subtitle on the internet and put it on the TV show. I have learned a lot using it since I started. Well... I'm not a master in English but since I started to learn 7 month ago I feel I've improved a lot! (I just knew the English that teach in schools) Today I want to talk about a TV show I just started, it's called Orange Is The New Black. From now on I'll use OITNB to refer to Orange Is The New Black (this name is quite big....) Well... the TV show is about a girl who goes to jail for and stupid action she made 10 year before the begging of the show and how she develops in jail. I love basically everything in OITNW, how the actors personify their characters, the mix in drama and comedy and also how they show the feeling in all the inmate in the jail. First, the actors are the best doing their things! I mean there is a character called "crazy eyes" I look for her on the internet and she is totally different from what I see on the show... I know that's hers work.. but she did it like the best!! I am not used to see such a good actors making their performance like that! So the producers looks for the best actors ever. Second, how they combine the drama and the comedy was a really cool way! Sometimes I really feel sad but in others moments I couldn't stop laughing! I really feel what the character fell... there a point in the shows that the character that you hate or you find disgusting you finally love them or feel sorry for them... In the develop of the episode there is a scene that show how every character got in jail. It show the reasons, how they feel, what they loss for this... how their family are about it... and show you that not all of them are in jail because they are the worst in the world but because they made bad decision in a desperate moment and have a lot of bad luck. I mean.. there's a lot of people who deserve to be in jail the rest of their live... but not all of them XD
Jul 28, 2014 9:11 PM
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This is really good! Here are some suggestions, though. There are parts that I wasn't sure I understood enough to make any constructive suggestions.

When I decided to learn English I started to watch a lot of TV shows to watch them in English without subtitles,so if If I didn't understand something I would repeat it until I could. understand and if it If that didn't work, I’d look for the subtitles on the internet and put it them on the TV show. I have learned a lot using it this method since I started.Well... I'm not a master in English I have not mastered English yet, but since I started to learn 7 months ago, I feel I've improved a lot! (I just knew the English that teach in schools) I would leave out the parentheses and just write out the sentence. Something like “Before this, I only learned formal English in school.”

Today I want to talk about a TV show I just started, it's called Orange Is The New Black. From now on I'll use OITNB to refer to Orange Is The New Black (this name is quite big....) Again, I would leave out the parentheses. I would write, “From now on, I’ll use OITNB to refer to Orange is the New Black since it’s such a long name." Well... the TV The show is about a girl Some people might object to calling her a girl since she is in her twenties. Consider something like “young woman.” who goes to jail for and stupid action she made10 year before the begging beginning of the show and how she develops in jail I’m not sure what you mean by that. About how her character develops? About her life in jail?. I love basically everything in OITNW,: how the actors personify their characters, the mix in drama and comedy and also how they show the feeling in Again, not sure what you mean. How the actors show the emotions of all the inmates in the jail? all the inmates in the jail. 



First, the actors are the best doing their things! I mean there is a character called "crazy eyes" I look for her on the internet and she is totally different from what I see on the show... I know that's hers work.. but she did it like the best!! I am not used to see such a good actors making their performance like that! So the producers looks for the best actors ever. 

Second, how they combine the drama and the comedy was a really cool way! Sometimes I really feel sad but in others moments I couldn't stop laughing! I really feel what the character fell... there a point in the shows that the character that you hate or you find disgusting you finally love them or feel sorry for them... 

 

 

Sorry—I’m not sure what you are trying to say in the two paragraphs above. I’m not sure I’d be much help here.

In the development of the each episode, there is a scene that shows how every why each character got in went to or was sent to jail. I think it should be “why” and not “how.” How would show their arrest and why would give you the story. It shows the reasons, how they feel, what they loss for this going to jail is... how their family are families feel about it... .and It shows you that not all of them are in jail because they are the worst in the world terrible people, but because they made bad decisions or a bad decision in a desperate moment and or have had a lot of bad luck. I mean.. there's a lot of people who deserve to be in jail the rest of their live... but not all of them XD Not sure what you mean by your last sentence. Sorry.

July 29, 2014

I made my own correction based on the common mistake I made XD

 

Orange Is The New Black

Hi everybody!!!

When I decided to learn English I started to watch a lot of TV shows to watch them in English without subtitle, so if I didn't understand something I repeat it until I could understand and if it didn't work I looked for the subtitle on the internet and put it on the TV show. I have learned a lot using it since I started. Well... I'm not a master in English but since I started to learn 7 month ago I feel I've improved a lot! (I just knew the English that teaches in schools)

Today I want to talk about a TV show I just started, it's called Orange Is The New Black. From now on I'll use OITNB to refer to Orange Is The New Black (this name is quite big....) Well... the TV show is about a girl who goes to jail for and stupid action she made 10 year before the begging of the show and how she develops in jail. I love basically everything in OITNW, how the actors personify their characters, the mix in drama and comedy and also how they show the feeling in all the inmate in the jail.

First, the actors are the best doing their things! I mean there is a character called "crazy eyes" I looked for her on the internet and she is totally different from what I saw on the show... I know that's hers works.. but she did it like the best!! I am not used to see such a good actors making their performance like that! So the producers looked for the best actors ever.

Second, how they combined the drama and the comedy was a really cool way! Sometimes I really feel sad but in others moments I couldn't stop laughing! I really feel how the character fell... there is a point in the shows that the character you hate or you find disgusting you finally love them or feel sorry for them...

In the develop of the episode there is a scene that show how every character got in jail. It show the reasons, how they feel, what they lost for this... how their family are about it... and show you that not all of them are in jail because they are the worst in the world but because they made bad decision in a desperate moment and have a lot of bad luck. I mean.. there's a lot of people who deserve to be in jail the rest of their live... but not all of them XD

July 29, 2014
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