Eunyung
Exciting Summer vacation! My summer vacation is going to start from this comming Friday! I'm very excited because I have a plan to go where I want to go. At first, I'm going to Everland which is a famous amusement park in Korea. I really expect the Summer parade of Everland, it is called "Summer Splash", and we can enjoy splashing water! Second, I will go to Seoul to meet my friend. One of my university friends got married 1 months ago, so she prepare to have a house warming party! The most important point is that I can do all of these with my family, especially my son! I hope that everyone can enjoy summer as you plan.
Jul 29, 2014 2:08 AM
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Exciting Summer vacation!

My summer vacation is going to start from this comming coming Friday! ('coming' could also be omitted)


I'm very excited because I have a plan to go where I want to go.


At first First, I'm going to Everland which is a famous amusement park in Korea.


I really expect the Summer parade of Everland, it is called "Summer Splash", and we can enjoy splashing water! (Sorry, I do not understand this.)


Second, I will go to Seoul to meet my friend.


One of my university friends got married 1 months month ago, so she prepare is preparing to have a house warming party!


The most important point is that I can do all of these with my family, especially my son!


I hope that everyone can enjoy summer as you plan. 

(I am not sure what you are trying to say.  Maybe you want to say - I hope that everyone will enjoy their plans for the summer.)  

July 29, 2014
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July 29, 2014
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