Santiago A
Professional Teacher
She is... She has a world below her hair, a world which in some occasions She let me come in, a world that invades in the real life and this sometimes becomes she in a be vulnerable and She distrust even me, but I just want to share my utopy with hers, without leave the reality in other site. See her cause impotence, her reactions never be predectable, even if She seems a be from the othe planet.
Jul 29, 2014 3:49 AM
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She is...

She has a world below <em>(under </em>or <em>beneath </em>is better<em>)</em> her hair, a world which, in on some occasions she <em>(</em>only capitalize <em>I</em>, unless you are doing this for poetic reasons?<em> )</em> lets me come in enter, a world that invades in the real life and this sometimes becomes she in a be makes her vulnerable and she distrust even me, but I just want to share my utopy utopia with hers, without leave the reality leaving reality in other site. <em> (on the other side [?])</em>
Seeing her causes impotence<em> </em>helplessness,<em></em> her reactions never be are never predectable predictable, even if sometimes she seems a be to be from the othe another planet.

July 29, 2014
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