please correct mistake for me.I hope for your help The bar graph depicts the total quantity of minutes people use to make phone calls which spilted into three kinds in the UK between 1995 and 2002.In

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please correct mistake for me.I hope for your help The bar graph depicts the total quantity of minutes people use to make phone calls which spilted into three kinds in the UK between 1995 and 2002.In general, while both mobiles and national and international phone calls saw an upward trend, there was a steady fluctuation in the local phone calls during the period. Also, the local phone calls were always the highest , the mobiles phone calls were usually on the bottom of three kinds. As we can see from the graph, the total number of the national and international went up steadily from 35 billion minutes in 1995 to 60 billion minutes in 2001 and then it remained fairly static at 60 billion minutes one year later. Regarding the mobiles phone calls , before a considerable growth from 1998 to 2002 ,the total number of its rose slowly by 7 billion minutes during 3 years period. As for the local phone calls , the total number of its climbed quickly from 70 billion minutes in 1995 to approximately 90 billion minutes in 1998 and remained unchangeably before a steep decrease over 4 years.

Jul 29, 2014 4:36 AM

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The bar graph depicts the total quantity number of minutes ("number" is used to describe time. "number of sec/min/hour/days/months/etc") people in the UK use to make phone calls which is split spilted into three kinds types of phone calls in the UK between 1995 and 2002. In general, while both ("both" can only be used when there are exactly two items. In this case, there are three.) the number of minutes of mobiles phone calls (quick tip: the phones that people carry around with them are called "mobiles" in the UK but "cellphones" in Canada and the US), national the number of minutes of domestic phone calls, and the number of minutes of international phone calls saw an upward trend, there was a steady fluctuation in the number of minutes of local phone calls during that period. Also, the number of minutes of local phone calls were always the highest, the number of minutes of mobiles phone calls were usually on the bottom the least of the three kinds.

As we can see from the graph, the total number of the national domestic and international phone calls went up steadily from 35 billion minutes in 1995 to 60 billion minutes in 2001, when and then it remained fairly static stable at 60 billion minutes until one year later. Regarding the number of minutes of mobiles phone calls , before a considerable growth from 1998 to 2002, the total number of its minutes rose increased (more natural) slowly by 7 billion minutes during a period of 3 years period.

As for the number of minutes of local phone calls, the total number of its minutes climbed quickly from 70 billion minutes in 1995 to approximately 90 billion minutes in 1998 and remained unchanged unchangeably before a steep decline ("steep decline" sounds more natural than "steep decrease") decrease over 4 years.