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用汉语本1 New practcal chinese reader. 练习 第一课 Speaking 9 新买用汉语本1 New practcal chinese reader. 练习 第一课 Speaking 9 画里有两个人-一个男人和一个女人。男人介绍自己。他说"很高新认识你". 女人回答"我也很高兴认识你"他们20多岁。他们好看的人。男人很高, 很 帅哥。他的头发一点长。女人有长直的头发 。 可能他们是同学。女人有些本书。他们看起来美国人或者欧洲。 天气好的。他们穿着t恤。他们很开心。他们笑 地方很漂亮。可能公园或者大学。 (我自知中文水準淺薄, 若不練習何能精進?) In the picture there are 2 people. A boy and a girl. The boy is introducing himself. He says "Pleased to meet you." The girl replies "Pleased to meet you too" . They are in their 20's. The boy is tall, handsome. His hair is quite long. Thw girl has long straight hair.Maybe they are students. The girl has got some books. They look like Americans or Europeans. The weather is nice. They are wearing t-shirts. They are happy. They are smiling. The place is nice Maybe a park or a university. Sorry I didn't get the picture. It's not too hard to imagine.
Jul 29, 2014 5:59 AM
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用汉语本1 New practical chinese reader. 练习 第一课 Speaking 9

新买用汉语本1 New practical chinese reader. 练习 第一课 Speaking 9

画里有两个人-一个男人和一个女人。一个男孩和一个女孩/一个男生和一个女生 are the correct match for "a boy and a girl";男人/ 女人 means man and woman.

男人正在介绍自己。 is introducing

他说"很高认识你"。

女人回答:"我也很高兴认识你"。他们20多岁。

他们好看的人。他们很好看 They are very good-looking. 他们是好看的人 sounds strange.

男人很高, 很 帅哥。他的头发一点长。男孩很高很帅/又高又帅,

女人有长直的头发 。 /女生留着一头长直发。

可能他们是同学。女人有些本书。女孩有一些书。/有几本书

他们看起来美国人或者欧洲。 天气很好。他们穿着t恤。他们很开心。他们微笑着。 地方很漂亮。可能是一个公园或者一所大学。

(我自知中文水準淺薄, 若不練習何能精進?)

In the picture there are 2 people. A boy and a girl. The boy is introducing himself. He says "Pleased to meet you." The girl replies "Pleased to meet you too" . They are in their 20's. The boy is tall, handsome. His hair is quite long. Thw girl has long straight hair.Maybe they are students. The girl has got some books. They look like Americans or Europeans. The weather is nice. They are wearing t-shirts. They are happy. They are smiling. The place is nice Maybe a park or a university.

Sorry I didn't get the picture. It's not too hard to imagine.

July 29, 2014

用汉语本1 New practcal chinese reader. 练习 第一课 Speaking 9

新买用汉语本1 New practcal chinese reader. 练习 第一课 Speaking 9

画里有两个人-一个男人和一个女人。男人介绍自己。他说"很高新认识你". 女人回答"我也很高兴认识你"他们20多岁。他们好看的人。男人很高, 很 帅。他的头发一点有些长。女人有长的的头发 。 可能他们是同学学生。女人拿着几本有些本书。他们看起来美国人或者欧洲。 天气非常。他们穿着t恤。他们很开心。他们笑。背景地方很漂亮。可能公园或者大学校园

(我自知中文水準淺薄, 若不練習何能精進?)

In the picture there are 2 people. A boy and a girl. The boy is introducing himself. He says "Pleased to meet you." The girl replies "Pleased to meet you too" . They are in their 20's. The boy is tall, handsome. His hair is quite long. Thw girl has long straight hair.Maybe they are students. The girl has got some books. They look like Americans or Europeans. The weather is nice. They are wearing t-shirts. They are happy. They are smiling. The place is nice Maybe a park or a university.

Sorry I didn't get the picture. It's not too hard to imagine.

July 29, 2014

  这位朋友你好,首先很高兴你能够投入巨大的勇气与精力来学习汉语,我在这里想要强调一点,希望你能够理解。

  你可以看到,很多中国朋友在热情的改作文,而仔细一看,他们的改法都不太一样。我想说的是,他们的改法都是正确的,你不要产生他们究竟哪个改的对的想法。把一个句子的意思正确表达出来的方式有很多种,比如一些句子在修改的过程中被改成了被动句,有一些则被调换了语序,这些都可以。而这正是汉语的魅力与难点所在,即汉语没有太过于死板和固定的语法,表达方式灵活多变,同样一句话要表达出正确的意思,可以有很多种说法。这就我想强调的,希望你能理解。

July 29, 2014
图片里有两个人,一个男生和一个女生。那个男生正在(be doing)介绍自己:“很高兴认识你。” 女生回答道:"我也很高兴认识你。“ 男生很高,而且帅气。他的头发也挺长。女生有一头长直发。他们可能是同学。女生有一些书。他们俩看起来像是美国人或是欧洲人。天气很好。他们穿着T恤衫。他们很高兴,微笑着。那个地方很漂亮,可能是一个公园或者是一间大学。
July 29, 2014
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