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My one day My one day Shanghai is getting into a real summer. It's very hot today. I stayed at home the whole day. I studied English for a half day and took a nap for one hour. When I was taking a nap, I was boiling a pot of water on the stove. So you can image, when I got up, the water was boiled away and the pot was dry. Luckily, no worse thing happened. Now it's getting dark outside, I have to think what for dinner. My refrigerator is empty. Maybe I should go to buy some vegetables and meat not only for dinner but also for the rest meals in the future three days. Besides, the weather is cold now due to the raining this afternoon. That sounds a good idea. So, I am leaving now. Thank you for your correction.
Jul 29, 2014 7:17 AM
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My one day

My one day

Shanghai is currently in the height of its getting into a real summer. It's was very hot today. I stayed at home the whole day. I studied English for a half day and took a nap for one hour. When Whilst I was taking a nap, I was boiling a pot of water on the stove. So you can imagine that, when I got up, the water was had evaporated boiled away and the pot was dry. Luckily, nothing terrible worse thing happened. Now it's getting dark outside, I have to think about what I want for dinner. My refrigerator is empty. Maybe I should go to buy some vegetables and meat not only for dinner, but also for the rest of my meals in the next future three days. Besides, the weather is cold now due to the raining this afternoon. That sounds a good idea. So, I am leaving now. Thank you for your correction.

 

Good!

-When refers to a specific point in time whereas <em>whilst</em> (British) and <em>while </em>(American) refer to a dutation of time in the past

-When water boils away it has <em>evaporated</em>

-In English we think <em>about</em> things

-In the <em>next few days</em> or in the <em>coming days</em>.

July 29, 2014
@shou, I think it's hot but I didn't check it. :-D
August 31, 2014
@Yeony, Yes. Especially on the heavy rainy days, a few people are walking on the street
August 31, 2014
Was the pot just dry, not hot?
July 29, 2014
Do you like going for a walk on rainy days? ^-^
July 29, 2014
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