Sergey
Jogging Blog (Monday).Usually I run around the stadium anticlockwise. In general, like most.But today, one of the guys ran against the general movement. "Perhaps this is a rebel", --I thought.He sees its meaning in this.Such people make revolution and discover new stars .Everything was easier.He has a crush on one of the girls who also ran with us.He run against the move to meet her more often. .
Jul 29, 2014 7:34 AM
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Jogging Blog

(Monday).  Usually I run around the stadium anticlockwise.  Normally, most people do it that way. But today, one of the guys ran against the general flow. [1] "Perhaps he's a rebel", I thought. But he sees its  a benefit [пользу] in this.  Such people turn around and discover new stars. Everything becomes easier. He had a crush on one of the girls who was running with us.  He was running in the opposite directon in order to meet her more often.

 

[1]  Variants:  .... ran in the opposite direction.       .... ran clockwise.

July 30, 2014

I just though I'd add that the word "anticlockwise" is British English.  In American English, we say "counterclockwise".

July 30, 2014

Jogging Blog

On Mondays, I Usually I run around the stadium anticlockwise. This is the norm and most people do it In general, like most. But today, one of the guys ran in the oposite direction against the general movement. "Perhaps he's this is a rebel" I thought. Perhaps he sees its meaning in doing something like this. Such people make revolutions and make new discoveries new stars. Everything was easier. He has a crush on one of the girls who was also running ran with us. He ran in the opposing direction run against the move to meet her more often.

 

Good!

-You can't write a whole sentence in brackets - it's just wrong. 

-You <em>must</em><em> put a space after a full stop!</em>

July 29, 2014
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