安Ann
The weather is so good The weather is so good since last friday, becayse the large rain took away the hot weather. Every time, when l go to work, l am so comfortable and powerful. The wind is so comfortable, l like it very much. Actually, l hate the summer very much. In the summer, l will be allergic and dizziness, l am so uncomfortable and donot want to have a meal. So when the weather is hot, l will always in the interior, l cannot go to travel. Most important is my skin will turn black, my friends always tell me that l amnot suitable for the black skin. PS:Thank you for correcting my entries. Have a nice day! Ann
Jul 29, 2014 11:51 AM
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The Weather Is So Good
The weather is so good since last friday, because the large rainfall took away the hotness. Now when l go to the work, l feel so comfortable and powerful. The wind is so nice and l like it very much. Actually, l hate the summer very much. In the summer, the hot weather causes allergy and dizziness for me, l feel so uncomfortable and do not want to have a meal. So when the weather is hot, l stay at the home, l don't travel. Most important thing is my skin turns darker, my friends always are tell me that the dark cololur skin doesn't quite suit me.

July 29, 2014

The weather is so good

The weather is has been so good (you could probably use the word "nice" here instead) since last friday, because the a large rain took away the hot weather. Every time, when l go to work, l am feel so comfortable and powerful. The wind is makes me feel so comfortable, l like it very much. Actually, l hate the summer very much. In the summer, l will be have a lot of problems with allergies and dizziness. l am so uncomfortable and donot don't want to eat have a meal. So when the weather is hot, l will always be inside in the interior. l can't go to travel. Most importantly, is my skin will turn darker black, my friends always tell me that l'm not suited for the black darker skin.
PS:Thank you for correcting my entries. Have a nice day! Ann

 

No problem.  You have a nice day too.:)

July 29, 2014
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