Alejandro
A letter in response to other Hello everyone, my english teacher has told me I should do a letter with the following instructions: You have moved to a new house in another part of your country. Write a reply to close friend giving news about how you are settling in to your new surroundings and what a typical day is like. This close friend has got a farm and before he has invited you to visit him. I would like to you´ll put me a mark between 0-10 in order to see the level of the letter. I won´t feel hurt if you put me a bad mark, thanks in advance. Hello Juan I haven´t been able to anwser for your letter because of I was very bussy with the move. Thank you so much for the invitation to visit the farm. As you know I adore animals and the lifestyle that there is in the countryside. In next holidays I promise you I´ll go visit you. By the way I have to tell you I´m not getting used to the life in my new city. I don´t meet people yet but I think that I have an opportunity in my career with my new job so I will do my best for keeping on. Lastly I´m working many hours and I haven´t almost any time to watch TV. When I have got freetime I go to the beach. I´m too much tanned. It´s a joke. I´m pale. Well I hope you there were like my letter(No se como poner esta frase, en español seria "Espero que te haya gusto mi carta"). I´m looking forward to hear from you. All the best. Jan.
Jul 29, 2014 6:40 PM
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A letter in response to other

Hello everyone, my english teacher has told me I should do a letter with the following instructions:

You have moved to a new house in another part of your country. Write a reply to close friend giving news about

how you are settling in to your new surroundings and what a typical day is like. This close friend has got a

farm and before he has invited you to visit him.

I would like to you´ll put me a mark between 0-10 in order to see the level of the letter. I won´t feel hurt if

you put me a bad mark, thanks in advance.

Hello Juan

I haven´t been able to anwser your letter because of I was very bssy with the move. Thank you
so much for the invitation to visit the farm. As you know I adore animals and the lifestyle that there is in the countryside. Next time I am on holiday, I promise I´ll come visit you.

By the way I have to tell you that I´m not getting used to the life in my new city. I have not met many people yet but I think that I have a good career opportunity with my new job so I will do my best to keep trying. Lastly I´m working long hours and I haven´t almost any time to watch TV. When I have freetime I go to the beach. I even have a tan. Just kidding- I´m still pale. Well I hope you like my letter [I don't know if this what you mean?] (No se como poner esta frase, en español seria "Espero que te haya gusto mi carta").

 

I look forward to hearing from you.

All the best 

Jan

July 29, 2014
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