Muqui
My family In my family are eleven members. My father, My mother I have thee brothers and one sister, two sisters in law, one neace and two nephies. I see my nephews everyday, they like play soccer and we play soccer together, also we watch cartoons like paw control or Diego go. My father works in construccion he makes houses. And me actually dont work but I hope I work soon.
Jul 30, 2014 3:39 AM
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My family

In my family There are eleven members in my family: my father, my and mother, I have three brothers, and one sister, two sisters-in-law, one niece and two nephews. I see my nephews everyday. They like to play soccer, and we play soccer together. also We also watch cartoons like Paw Control or Diego go.
My father works in construction, he makes building houses. And me I actually don't work, but I hope I to work soon.

 

There are actually 12 members in your family, including you! 

July 30, 2014

My family.

In my family there are eleven members. 

(or "My family has eleven members," would sound more natural.) 

My father, my mother, I have three brothers, and one sister, two sisters in law, one niece, and two nephews. I see my nephews everyday, they like to play soccer and we play soccer together. also we We also

("We also," sounds more natural) 

watch cartoons like Paw Patrol or Go, Diego, Go!

My father works in construction. He makes houses. And me actually dont work but I hope I will work soon.

 

Comment:

Good luck finding your job, I hope you enjoy it.

July 30, 2014
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