Early mid-life crisis
Yesterday, I was told that my childhood friend’s father, who was only in his early fifties, had passed away because of cancer. <em>(Perfect grammatically!)</em>
Naturally I feel sorry for him, but on the other hand, I am depressed and begin to question the conventional paths designed for most average people, which involve a quite a number of things that society expects us to attain or find do, such as a proper degree, a decent job, an eligible spouse with whom we may not necessarily fall in love, etc. <em>(Wonderful work! Note "quite a number of". I used "attain or find" because you wouldn't "do" a degree, a job, etc.)</em>
My friend’s father managed to complete the list, but he was so unhappy. <em>(Perfect grammatically!)</em>
Throughout my life, I have always been a good girl, a good daughter, a good student, but I’m tired of it. <em>(Again, perfect grammatically!)</em>
I do not want to fit in the society and respond to certain rules anymore like I used to. <em>("Society" is uncountable. When you use an uncountable noun in a general sense, leave out the definite article. Otherwise, you would use it. Example: "Work is becoming very challenging these days." (general sense) "The work my boss assigned me last night is very challenging." (specific sense) I'd end the sentence here.)</em>
Maybe I am experiencing some sort of early mid-life crisis. I want to be brave and funny and creative and decisive, anything but normal. <em>(Note "anything but..." "This film is anything but entertaining!" (It's really, really boring!))</em>
<em>Very, very well done! And I think you have had a quite valuable and commendable moment of insight.</em>