A story I made. Summer is a bad ass. She lived some things that left scars in her heart. She grew up in a strictly religious family, which not allowed anything they think inappropriate. But she loves

Nicole

A story I made. Summer is a bad ass. She lived some things that left scars in her heart. She grew up in a strictly religious family, which not allowed anything they think inappropriate. But she loves tattoos, piercing, drugs, alcohol ... everything she had forbidden. So when she turned 16 she ran away from home with a kind of a "boyfriend". He was that kind of jackass, full of tattoos, bad boy that makes every girl suspire. She was crazy about him, and he ... he liked her a lot, but physically. He was a drug dealer beside his dumb, but loyal friends. They also lived together so obviously, she was never far from his side. Everyone in his circle knew her and called her "his girlfriend". That was her perfect life, despite the environment in which she was handled and the treatment she was receiving most of the time from him. Until one night after a party, she discovered that he was cheating on her. She thought that he was the only could trust, and he hurt her. After that, she decided come back home and beg for the forgiveness of her parents. But when she finally came to her house she realized that there was nobody living in that place. Since that day, she never trusts in anybody again and makes her own way to live. She has been in such of horrible place, but she learned so many things about the night and the people of the night. She knew infinite kind of drugs and she knows about drinks, so started to work in clubs helping in the bar or cleaning the place. With the money and tips she earns she could rent a small place, but her own place. Her biggest dream is to be a tattoo artist. She loves to draw and in her free time she practice tattooing oranges and pig's ears. But she doesn't have many tattoos, just three. The first one is a diamond which means beauty and wealth. The second one is a skull with a rose which means is related to death. And the last one is a phrase "good girl" in her fingers that's ironically related to her past.

Jul 30, 2014 8:34 AM

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Summer is a "bad ass." She lived trough some things that left scars on her heart. She grew up in a strict, religious family that did not allow anything they thought inappropriate, but she loves tattoos; piercings; drugs; alcohol; everything she had been forbidden to experience. When she turned sixteen she ran away from home with her boyfriend. He was that kind of jackass: full of tattoos, the bad boy that young girls yearn for. She was crazy about him and he; he liked her a lot, but only physically. He was a drug dealer along with his dumb but loyal friends. Summer lived with him and she was never far from his side. Everyone in his circle knew her and called her his girlfriend. This was her "perfect" life, despite the way she was handled and treated most of the time from him.

One night after a party she discovered that he was cheating on her. She thought that he was the only one she could trust and he hurt her. After that, she decided return home and beg for her parent's forgiveness, but when she arrived at her old home she discovered that her family had moved away. The house was abandoned. That day she lost all faith in people and decided to make her own way in life. She has been in such horrible places, but she learned a lot about the night and it's people. She was familiar with drugs and alcohol, so she started working in nightclubs; cleaning and helping with the bar. With the money she earns she rents a place to live. It's a tiny place but it's hers. Her dream is to become a Tattoo Artist. She loves to draw, and in her free time she practices tattooing oranges or pig's ears. She has three tattoos herself: a diamond which represents beauty and wealth, a skull with a rose which represents her awareness of death, and she has "good girl" tattooed across her fingers; an ironic salute to her past.

Great story, Nicole. I'm looking forward to reading more about Summer's adventures! rearranged a few words to make it read better. Remember not to start sentences with contractions (But, And . . .). Very interesting.

July 30, 2014

A story I made.

Summer is a bad ass. She lived through some things that left scars in her heart. She grew up in a strictly religious family, which where she was not allowed anything they think inappropriate. But she loves tattoos, piercing, drugs, alcohol ... everything she had was forbidden. So when she turned 16 she ran away from home with a kind of a "boyfriend". He was that kind of jackass, full of tattoos, bad boy that makes every girl suspire [not sure what you mean by suspire]. She was crazy about him, and he ... he liked her a lot, but physically. He was a drug dealer beside along with his dumb, but loyal friends. They also lived together so obviously she was never far from his side. Everyone in his circle knew her and called her "his girlfriend". That was her perfect life, despite the environment in which she was handled and the treatment she was receiving most of the time from him. Until, one night, after a party, she discovered that he was cheating on her. She thought that he was the only person she could trust, and he hurt her. After that, she decided come back home and beg for the forgiveness of her parents. But when she finally came to her house she realized that there was nobody living in that place there. Since that day, she never trusts in anybody again and makes her own way to live in life. She has been in such of a horrible place, but she learned so many things about the night and the people of the night. She knew infinite kind of drugs and she knows about drinks, so started to work in clubs helping in the bar or cleaning the place. With the money and tips she earns she could rent a small place, but her own place. Her biggest dream is to be a tattoo artist. She loves to draw and in her free time she practices tattooing oranges and pig's ears. But she doesn't have many tattoos; just three. The first one is a diamond which means ["signifies" sounds better] beauty and wealth. The second one is a skull with a rose which means is related to death. And the last one is a phrase "good girl" in her fingers that's ironically related to her past.