zhoujingya
i have a new friend i met a people on italki .he and me wants to improve our English . i think interesting make we became friends.He is a Indonesia people ,i feel he is very nice . we will talk everything in English .i hope we will be better soon
Jul 30, 2014 9:23 AM
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i have a new friend

i met a people on italki .he and me wants to improve our English . i think interesting make we became friends.He is a Indonesia people ,i feel he is very nice . we will talk everything in English .i hope we will be better soon.

 

I got a new friend.

I met him on italki. we both want to improve our english. I think interest in language make us friends. he is an Indonesian. i sense that he is nice. we have conversations in english. i hope we will improve soon.

 

July 30, 2014

[I] met [someone] on [italki.] [We want] to improve our [English.] [I] think [it is] interesting make we became [friends. He] is [Indonesian.] [I sense that] he is very [nice.] [We] will talk [entirely] in [English. I] hope we will be [improve soon.]


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<i> met <a people> on <italki .he and me wants> to improve our <English . i> think interesting make we became <friends.He> is <a Indonesia people ,i feel> he is very <nice . we> will talk <everything> in <English .i> hope we will be <better soon>

July 30, 2014
hohohoho
August 1, 2014
Congratulations! I´m speak English a lot people. Speaking English with people around the world is a very interesting form to learnt that language. Good lucky ^^
July 30, 2014
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