Battlefield I palyed to piano since came back. It gave me a consolation when I found I might fall into a raod where many ghosts died on the market I quited. It is no use to face another form by orig

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Battlefield I palyed to piano since came back. It gave me a consolation when I found I might fall into a raod where many ghosts died on the market I quited. It is no use to face another form by original idea like body power. It is a joke when chinese met westerner's gun. They believe their kung fu can win westerner's gun. They failed. It has been spreaed one generation by one generation. It might be inflamed and fill with self-conflict. Chinese are surprise to know kung fu is illusion at that time. At least, the mysterious power did not come up. So...I think that is better to stop everything. Although I felt sad, There are the same people with me. It is very interesting they know my feeling. Sometimes you go through it then you have common point to talk about. The lord of the ring, it seems that show many life spirit, does not it? Everything seems to be usual but many mental action still active and look like we are fighting on battlefield. Actually, I want to get the experience so I enter to it but the war can not wait for you It is not a game you control it. It is real battlefield only died in another form. I am thinking the meaning a little like find meaning for meaning....

Jul 30, 2014 10:19 AM

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Battlefield

I have played the piano since I came back.
It gave me some consolation when I found I might fall over on a road where many ghosts died [on the market - don't understand this]
I quited [not a verb]. It is not possible to face another form by original idea like body power [I'm sorry I don't understand this].
It is a joke when a Chinese meets a Westerner's gun. They believe their kung fu can overcome a Westerner's gun.
They failed. It has been spread from one generation to the next.

It might be inflamed and fill with self-conflict. Chinese are surprised to know kung fu is illusion at that time. At least, the mysterious power did not come up. [I'm sorry I don't understand this]
So...I think that is better to stop everything.
Although I felt sad, there are the same people with me. It is very interesting for them to know my feelings.
Sometimes you go through it then you have common point to talk about.
The lord of the ring, it seems that show many life spirit, does not it?
Everything seems to be usual but many mental action still active and look like we are fighting on battlefield.
Actually, I want to get the experience so I enter to it but the war can not wait for you
It is not a game you control it. It is real battlefield only died in another form. I am thinking the meaning
a little like find meaning for meaning....

[I am sorry but I gave up correcting because I found it too hard to understand the meaning. Please do not be discouraged. I can tell you have an original perspective and want to express it. But can I recommend that you practise English writing at the moment by writing plainly about simple, everyday issues? I hope you succeed. Best wishes, Michael]

July 30, 2014