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Today everythings is bad for me.In the morning,I got up at 6:00.And then I go to the park to read English,everything is normal.But when I finished reading.I dicided going home to get something left,but I forgot the important thing,I left keys on my desk.At that moment I feeled I just like a ass,no no no not like ,it's truth.UM.....I was such disappoint about myself.Why I always do in error.
Next when I arrived in company,I found that so many things were waiting for me to deal with.This is not too bad,at afternoon I had to work with somebody that he is a disgusting man in mind.But I have no choice for work I must stand on him.
I thought when the times over and come off work,I can do something enjoyable.But I was wrong when I came to my home,I found I cann't open the door because I don't have the keys.
It is actually bad day,isn't it?
Damon,Diary.

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    Today

    Today everythings is has been bad for me.In the morning,I got up at 6:00.And then I go went to the park to read English,everything is was normal.But when I finished reading., I dicided decided going to go home to get something left I forgot,but I forgot the most important thing,I left keys on my desk.At that moment I feeled I just felt like a ass,no no no not like ,it's the truth.UM.....I was such disappoint so disappointed about in myself.Why do I always do in error things wrong.
    Next, when I arrived in at the company,I found that so many things were waiting for me to deal with.This is was not too bad, at in the afternoon I had to work with somebody that he is who was a disgusting man in mind (this doesn't translate well, maybe say "a perverted man").But I have no choice, so for work I must stand on him.
    I thought, when the time's (contraction of "time" and "is"; requires an apostrophe) over up and I come get off work,I can do something enjoyable.But I was wrong. when I came to my home,I found I cann't couldn't open the door because I don't didn't have the keys.
    It is actually bad day,isn't it?
    Damon,Diary.

     

    Hi Damon,

     

    In English writing we always use a space between a comma and the next word. 

    Cat, dog, hamster is correct

    Cat,dog,hamster is not correct

     

    From reading your text, it seemed that I was correcting your verb tenses much more than the other mistakes. It might help your writing to revise the past simple and past perfect tenses :-)

     

    Today

    Today everythings is has gone badly for me.  In the morning, I got up at 6:00am and then I go went to the park to read English. Everything is seemed normal. But when I finished reading. I decided going to go home to get something I had left behind, but I forgot the most important thing, I had left my keys on my desk. At that moment I feeled I just felt like an ass, no no no not like [what are you trying to ay here?], it's the truth. Um.....I was such so disappointed in about myself. Why do I always do in error make mistakes? 

    Next When I arrived in company at work, I found that so many things were waiting for me to deal with. This is not wasn't too bad, but at in the afternoon I had to work with somebody that he who is a disgusting man in his mindset. But I had no choice, for work I must stand on him I had to work with him.
    I thought when the times over and come off I had finished work, I could do something enjoyable. But I was wrong. when I came to my home, I found I couldn't open the door because I didn't have the keys.
    It was actually bad day, wasn't it?
    Damon, Diary.

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