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A summary. Jades´s story was about her husband. When she met him he was kind and quite shy. He liked videogames too much and when she went to visit him at his home he was always sitting at the computer but se did not care. Three years before they got married and had a son. She described those three years as bad because her husband had a problem with videogames. When she asked him to watch a movie, to chat about the day or something he ignored her and still playing. She had told that even when his parents visited them he continued with his videogames and she had to appear normal. She was worried about their son because she did not want that he started to play videogames and had the same behaviour than his father. Sometimes she had thought why she stayed with that guy and she had threatened to leave him. She loved him and she knew that he needed help, she thought that it was like a drug, so she decided to help him.
Jul 30, 2014 2:33 PM
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A summary.

Jades´s story was about her husband. When she met him he was kind and quite shy guy. He liked to play videogames too very much and when she went to visit him at his home he was always sitting at infront of the computer but she did not care.

Three years before earlier, they got married and had a son. She described those three years as bad worse because her husband had a problem with videogames. When she asked him to come for watching a movie, or to chat about the day or something else he ignored her and still continued playing.
She had told that even when his parents visited them he continued with his videogames and she had to appear normal.

She was worried about their son because she did not want that he started to play videogames and had the same behaviour than like his father.

Sometimes she had thought why she stayed with that guy and she had threatened to leave him. She loved him and she knew that he needed help, she thought that it was like a drug, so she decided to help him.

July 30, 2014

A summary.

Jades's story was about her husband. When she first met him he was kind and quite shy. He liked videogames too much and, when she went to visit him at his home, he was always sitting in front of the computer, but she did not mind.

Three years ago they got married and had a son. She described those three years as bad because of her husband's had a problem with videogames. When she would ask him to watch a movie, to chat about the day, or something, he would ignore her and continue playing.
She said that even when his parents visited them he continued with his videogames and she had to act normal.

She was worried about their son because she did not want him to start playing videogames and behaving the same as his father.

Sometimes she wondered why she stayed with that guy and she had threatened to leave him. She loved him and she knew that he needed help. She thought that it was like an addiction, so she decided to help him.

 

Good story, well told! I was very picky with corrections. I hope you don't mind. It was already very good!

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