Asking for information about courses.

Hi! This is me writing an email to a local english teaching institute! I could love if someone give me a bit of feedback. Thanks! :)

Good afternoon! I'm looking for information about the conversation course. I need to grasp a little bit of fluency in my speak improve my speaking fluency (I'm more or less good at listening). Mainly because of business reasons: in essence for example, talking to potential customers.
It could would be ideal to take the intermediate conversation course and study on my own all grammar deficiencies that could happen. potential grammar problems.

Buen día! Quería obtener un poco de información sobre el curso de conversación. Necesito adquirir un poco de fluidez en la comunicación, sobre todo al hablar. Es por motivos laborales, más que nada poder comunicarme en inglés con algún posible cliente.
Sería ideal poder tomar directamente el curso intermedio de conversación, y suplir yo mismo las deficiencias de gramática que vayan surgiendo.

Asking for information about courses.

Hi! This is me writing an email I have written to a local English teaching institute! I would love it if someone would give me a bit of feedback. Thanks! :)

Good afternoon! I'm looking for information about the conversation course. I need to gain a little bit more fluency in my speaking (I'm better atlistening). I need to do this mainly for business reasons, more than anything, to talk to potential customers.
The intermediate conversation course would be ideal for me.  I would supplement this with some self-study of the grammatical mistakes which I hope to identify on the course.  that could happen.  [<em>Good effort.  I read your Spanish original.  Sometimes English idioms and Spanish idioms are surprisingly similar e.g. mas que nada.  I learnt this nugget of information from a Spaniard in England when I was learning Spanish.  I am sure it won't work every time but when I speak Spanish, I tend to transliterate with a bit more confidence.  Hope you enjoy the course! Michael</em>]

Buen día! Quería obtener un poco de información sobre el curso de conversación. Necesito adquirir un poco de fluidez en la comunicación, sobre todo al hablar. Es por motivos laborales, más que nada poder comunicarme en inglés con algún posible cliente.
Sería ideal poder tomar directamente el curso intermedio de conversación, y suplir yo mismo las deficiencias de gramática que vayan surgiendo.