Lucas
Family business My family have a business related with frozen-foods. We make lasagnes and other Italians food to sell in supermarkets. But it is not like an unhealthy industrial food, it is a homemade food. Who command the kitchen is my mother, who is helped by an employee. My father manage the business and hand over the products. Presently we are selling just in our city and the region around but we want to expand it to other citys. For that we need to buy some machines to rise the production and grow up our small enterprise. You can know our page on facebook through the following link. Visit us, make your request and like it. =D King regards! https://www.facebook.com/smaniottocongelados
Jul 30, 2014 6:41 PM
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My family ha[s] a business related t[o] frozen[ ]foods. We make lasagn[a] and other Italian food [products] to sell in supermarkets. But [u]nlike industrial food[s], [ours] is homemade [an]d [healt]h[y. My m]o[ther] command[s] the kitchen, w[it]h [ass]is[tanc]e [from] an employee. My father manage[s] the business and d[eli]ver[s] the products.
[Currently,] we are selling just in our city and th[e n]e[arby] region[,] but we want to expand to other cit[ie]s. For that[,] we need to buy some machines to r[a]ise production and [build] up our small enterprise.

You can [visit] our page on [F]acebook [a]t the following link. Visit us, make your request[,] and enjoy!] =D

Kin[d] regards!

 

Here is what I removed from yours:
My family ha<ve> a business related <wi>t<h> frozen<->foods. We make lasagn<es> and other Italian<s> food to sell in supermarkets. < it is> n<ot >lik<e an unh>e<althy> industrial food, <it> is< a> homemade <foo>d<.> <W>ho command the kitchen< is my mother>, wh<o> is< help>e<d> <by> an employee. My father manage the business and <han>d< o>ver the products.
<Presently> we are selling just in our city and the regi<on ar>o<u>n<d> but we want to expand< it> to other cit<y>s. For that we need to buy some machines to ris<e th>e production and <grow> up our small enterprise.

You can <know> our page on <f>acebook t<hrough> the following link. Visit us, make your request and <like it.> =D

Kin<g> regards!

July 30, 2014
I love Italian food. Im sure that you have a very delicious food.
July 30, 2014
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