I love to run
I like to run very much. I useually go out for a run three or four times per a week. Sometimes days I run for approximately around 1 hour and other days I run about 45 minutes. There are many reasons why I love to run: I can control my weight, I can enjoy of my city while I am running, I can train for some races and the most important reason: running makes me feel good.
Great! I also love running!
-Per week is better than <em>a </em>week
-Sometimes is better that <em>on some days</em>
-The words <em>around</em> often relates to physical space
-The word I is <em>always</em> a proper noun