carlos
I love to run I like to run very much. I useually go out for a run three o four times a week. Some days I run around 1 hour and other days I run about 45 minutes. There are many reasons why I love to run: i can control my weight, i can enjoy of my city while I am running, I train for some races, and the most important reason: running makes me feel good.
Jul 30, 2014 8:58 PM
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I love to run

I like to run very much. I useually go out for a run three or four times per a week. Sometimes days I run for approximately around 1 hour and other days I run about 45 minutes. There are many reasons why I love to run: I can control my weight, I can enjoy of my city while I am running, I can train for some races and the most important reason: running makes me feel good.

 

Great! I also love running!

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July 30, 2014
This is really good habit. I am little lazy in this matter. But running is very important.
July 30, 2014
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