Adriana Morales
What I do today I was going to a poetry club every wednesday, but today happend something... The professor never he never came. Then, I go to a peruvian restaurant in a neighborhood called La Candelaria a tourist site, I love that place. I want to be a better speaker and knowledgeable of English language, I think that it's beautiful, also, I want to know the U.K and the United States. I love the rock music and I want understand everything about all the lyrics and watch movies in the original language. If you can correct me I'll be grateful Thanks :D
Jul 31, 2014 2:40 AM
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     I <em>go to my</em> poetry club every <em>Wednesday but</em> <em>today</em> the professor never <em>arrived, so </em>I <em>decided to </em>go to <em>this</em> <em>Peruvian</em> restaurant in La Candelaria, a <em>tourist neighborhood that</em> I love.

     I want to <em>become fluent in English because</em> I think that it's <em>a </em>beautiful <em>language. I'm also interested in learning about the United Kingdom and the</em> United States <em>of America</em>. I love <em>Rock Music</em> and I want <em>to be able to </em>understand the lyrics. <em>I'd love to be able to</em> <em>understand the dialogue of</em> <em>English language </em>movies. 

<em>     Letras de canciones son difíciles de entender. Disfruto de la traducción de las canciones en español y tratar de comprender el significado detrás de las palabras. ¡Buena suerte a ti!</em>

July 31, 2014
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What I do today

I was going to have been going to a poetry club every Wednesday, but today happend something something happened... The professor never he never came, Then, so I go went to a Peruvian restaurant in a neighborhood called 'La Candelaria', (which is) a tourist site/a tourist attraction. I love that place.

I want to be a better speaker and be more knowledgeable of the English language/I would like to speak English better and I wish to know more about the language. I think that it's beautiful, also, I want to know (more) about the U.K and the United States.

I love the rock music and I want to understand everything about all the lyrics. and I would also like to watch movies in the original language.

If you can correct me I'll be grateful
Thanks :D

July 31, 2014
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What I did today
 

I am going to a poetry club every wednesday, but today something happened... The professor never came. Then, I went to a peruvian restaurant in a neighborhood called La Candelaria a tourist site. I love that place.

I want to be a better speaker and know more about the English language, I think that it's beautiful. Also, I want to know/learn about the U.K and the United States.

I love rock music and I want to  understand everything about the lyrics and watch movies in their original language.

If you can correct me I'll be grateful
Thanks :D

July 31, 2014
I used to go to poetry club every Wednesday, but today, one of the members that I know called on my cell phone and informed me that the professor excused and will not come. Accordingly, I decided to go to a restaurant on my neighbourhood called La Candelaria. I love that place because of its spectacular panoramic view.
July 31, 2014
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