Cinzia
Our holiday This morning my eldest sun left to the mountain with his group scout for 9 days. They had to change their destination because it has rained too much and the place where they was going to go and put their tents was awash. Tomorrow my yungest sun is leaving with my brother and his children to the seaside, and we all hope they will have some sunny days ! The day after tomorrow my daughter is leaving too, to the mountain with her group scout, so next week my husband and I will be alone !!! For a whoole week ! I can't believe it...We are married for 14 years and it is the first time we are alone, from when we are parents. We aren't off from work but it will be a holiday for us, too.
Jul 31, 2014 11:25 AM
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Our holiday

 

This morning my eldest son left for the mountains with his scout group for 9 days.

 

They had to change their destination (at the 11th hour/ at the last minute) because it has rained so much and the place where they were going to go and put up their tents / (or: were going to camp) was awash / was flooded / was sodden.


Tomorrow my youngest sun is leaving with my brother and his children for (a holiday at) the seaside, and we all hope they will have some sunny days!


The day after tomorrow my daughter is leaving for the mountains with her scout group too, so next week my husband and I will be alone!!! For a whole week! I can't believe it...we have been married for 14 years and this will be the first time we have been alone since we became parents. We aren't off from work / or: we still have to go to work but it will be a holiday for us, too.

 

Excellent, Cinzia, well done! Few errors and most of those were minor.

 

We usually refer to mountains in the plural (even if we're only visiting one in particular, in which case we'd be more likely to refer to it by name : e.g. we're camping in the mountains; we're hiking up Mont Blanc ;  we're trekking up Ben Nevis...). We also LEAVE FOR or GO TO somewhere, never LEAVE TO anywhere...

 

We say 'scout group' not 'group scout'.

 

Exclamation marks come straight after the word so you need to omit any space in between...

July 31, 2014

Our Holiday

This morning my eldest son left to for the mountains with his group scout group for 9 days. They had to change their destination because there has been too much rain it has rained too much and the place where they was were originally going to camp to go and put their tents was awash.
Tomorrow my youngest son is leaving with my brother and his children to for the seaside, and we all hope they will have some sunny days !
The day after tomorrow my daughter is leaving too, she is going to the mountains with her group scout group, so next week my husband and I will be alone !!! For a whoole week ! I can't believe it...We have been  are married for 14 years and it is the first time we are will be alone, since we became from when we are parents. We aren't off from work but it will be a holiday for us, too.

July 31, 2014

Our holidays

This morning my eldest sun son left to the mountain with his group of scouts for 9 days. They had to changed their destination because it had rained too much and the place where they was were going to camp or stay. and put their tents was awash.
Tomorrow my yungest son sun is leaving with my brother and his children to the seaside, and we all hope that they will have some sunny days!
The day after tomorrow my daughter is leaving too, to the mountain with her group of scouts, so next week my husband and I will be alone !!! For a whoole week ! I can't believe it...We are married for 14 years and it this is the first time we are will be alone, from since when we are parents. We aren't have no off from work but it will be a holidays for us, too.

 

I am not an expert of English, this is just a try, Lets see the correction from an expert..:)

 

 

July 31, 2014

Our holiday

This morning my eldest son left to go to the mountains with his scout group for 9 days. They had to change their destination because it has rained too much and the place where they were going to go and put their tents was awash.
Tomorrow my youngest son is leaving with my brother and his children to go to the seaside, and we all hope they will have some sunny days !
The day after tomorrow my daughter is leaving too, to go to the mountain with her scout group, so next week my husband and I will be alone !!! For a whole week ! I can't believe it...We have been married for 14 years and it is the first time we are alone, since we have been parents. We aren't off from work but it will be a holiday for us, too.

 

My sons were scouts too! I tried to send you a follower request but couldn't find the correct button. Please feel free to follow me and maybe we can chat.

 

August 10, 2014
We will try to do! Thanks. :)
July 31, 2014
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