What the Beauty Industry brings to us
The beauty industry has sprung up across China in recent years and business is booming. As a result of the popularity of the beauty industry, our lives have changed.
Initially, the beauty industry brought us beauty. The love of beauty is common to all humans; having a nice appearance can make us more confident. More and more people hope, through the beauty industry, to become beautiful. For example, cosmetics can hide skin defects, this is why an increasing number of girls use make up.
Moreover, the rise of the beauty industry can promote economic development. In other words, the development of the beauty industry can enhance the tax income of a country and provide opportunities of employment, therefore, economic development can be obtained.
However, it must be mentioned, that in the beauty industry there also exist some shortages. Take the quality of the beauty products as an example; if the quality of the products cannot meet legal requirements, you may be absorbing toxic chemicals from the use of beauty products. We must be rational in our treatment of the beauty industry.
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