The White Goose

The white goose was given to me by one of my friends who would likes to travel far away to another place. I took the white "Big Bird" [if you mean the character in Sesame Street, otherwise just write "I took the big white bird"] into my house home [house = 屋, 家 = home] and kept it in the yard. It stretched out its head as long as it could to look around the yard. On seeing thisthat, I thought to myself: "What a pride proud animal!" [proud = good, prideful = bad"]

 
The goose’s pride shows up in its perfectly form when especially when its is crying, walking in its gait and of course when it is eating. The goose’s Its cry call is deep and low and serious, Like the sound of as if in scolding. Its former owner told me that keeping a goose means keeping is like keeping a dogs. [or "... keeping geese is like keeping dogs"] This is  because the goose/ could help to watch houses they make good watchdogs. Surely enough, later I found that they goose certainly screamed strictly screeched/honked at when strangers walking into the yard and sometimes it cried as wildly as dogs most vehmently even when someone was is just walking beyond outside the fence.

When Once it  has done with it, finished eating a mouthful of meal, it would stride to have a drink even if the basin with was water was far away from it. Then it would walked back to eat soil and grass. It would be back to go on its meal after having soil and grass the whole process would repeat. When it was having its meal so calmly, someone must stay with it, like the servant waiter/food server/ in a restaurant. The nearby dogs nearby know the goose very well., and They used to will hide by the fence in watching. when the goose was having meal, They dogs would ran as fast as they could to eat its jump on the food hard when the goose walked away pridely when it leaves the food to have a drink and eat soil with the dirt and grass. Occassionally, the goose returned early, stretching out its long neck to bite dogs and screaming terribly screeched horribly at the dogs. The dogs would run up away to the fence and lay in waited for another chance. When it have had another mouthful of meals, it would walk away to drink and eat soil and grass. So once more, this scenario repeats. The dogs would come up to eat its meal and ran away. When it came to eat again, the meal box was already empty the food was gone and still not enough for it, it would. The goose screamed honked wildly with its a reared head, as though it was the fault of the  up, which seemed to blame its owner on little food for it too little food. Then Like a servant/slave in attendance to the emperor, we would add more food for it and stand beside it.  This is because there were many dogs, one dog left if one leaves, another will take its place. and another dog would come to eat.

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The Goose was takes much pride when in its began gait/walking. It was generally Unlike ducks, but the duck which waddles walks much quickly and showed greater caution,  upset; and the geese do no such things.  They walked in blatantness and without caution as if they owned the road. carelessly, If not, like the painted face role in the of a Chinese opera actor walking in sweeping gestures onto the stage. It stood in a very pride way, They stand in their stance and never give way to people who walking up to them it. Sometimes it Not only stopped people walking past content with only this, sometimes they it but would stretched out its their long necks to bite them passerbys.

We often laughed when while watching the our goose having dinner. Our goose It prefers cold meals and ate eat three times a day. [Must use present tense, otherwise it is no longer alive]Its meals included another three things when it ate: water, soil dirt and grass. At firstly it would have a mouthful of dirt clod mean. and then it drank a mouthful of some water. Finally it walked away to find soil and look for grass to eat. Perhaps these soil and grasses have had different but delectable delicious tastes for them. [The dirt helps to grind the food for digestion in their stomachs] These ingredients were not very inexpensive and their diet is regular. . But the way in which it ate was self-consistent and meticulous. 不明, 只猜猜

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When it finished eating a mouthful of meal, it would stride to have a drink even if the basin with water was far away from it. Then it would walked back to eat soil and grass. It would be back to go on its meal after having soil and grass. When it was having meal so calmly, someone must stay with it, like the servant in a restaurant. The dogs nearby knew the goose ver wel, and they used to hide by the fence watching when the goose was having meal, the dogs would ran as fast as they could to eat its food hard when the goose walked away pridely to drink and eat soil and grass. Occassionlly, the goose returned early, stretching out its long neck to bite dogs and screaming terribly at dogs. The dogs would run up to the fence and waited another chance. When it have had another mouthful of meals, it would walk away to drink and eat soil and grass. The dogs would come up to eat its meal and ran away. When it came to eat again, the meal box was already empty. The goose screamed wildly with its head up, which seemed to blame its owner on little food for it. Then we would add more food for it and stood beside it, because there were many dos, one dog left and another dog would come to eat.
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