Writing for FCE 2
Hello again, I have written another letter to practice for my FCE test, I would be very grateful If you could correct it.
Dear Clara Bornes,
I am writing to apply for a place in your summer music school. I think I am a suitable candidate for that course.
Firstly, I would like to explain to you my motivation for this course. I want to be a professional musician and I think that this is the best opportunity to get a formal training in music.
Furthermore, I am a drummer but I also play other percussion instruments in three different bands: a rock band, a Jazz band and a flamenco group where I play flamenco box. Regarding my previous musical training, I have studied music for several years in Seville by my own, for this reason I feel ready for your course.
Naturally I like different styles of music. My favourite music is rock'n'roll like Led Zeppellin, Deep Purplen or 'The Doors'. But I also like Jazz and Flamenco like Max Roach or Camarón.
Finally, I would like to thank you for taking the time to consider my application. It would be a very important moment for me as I believe this course, together with my passion for music, would benefit me a lot for my future.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Diego.
I think it would be better if the tone is a little bit more formal. :)