Corrections are red
Suggestions are blue
Everything else is green
If You Could, Help Me! (1)
I want to get in contact with ("get in touch with" sounds better, I think, or simply "meet") a native speaker (girl) from the Us, or the UK or Canada, to help me improve my language English.
I will would be grateful for your help.
Thank you (:
(1) Most words are capitalized in an English title.