It's best to provide an English version so that we can help you better.  This way we don't jump through mental hoops.  Haifeng is sincere and honest enough to say what I wanted to say as well.  It is nice that others are being courteous. However, you won't improve much.

My guess is "Today I woke up noon.  I went to the movies for a good show. I had dinner with my family".  So the translation is

今天, ＋二點起/身/床, 去看一部好电影. 然后与家人吃晚钣.

Today

八月一号:
今天，十二小时我醒来。我去剧院。 我看好的戏剧。我吃晚餐同我的家庭。
Bā yuè yī hào:
Jīntiān, shí'èr xiǎoshí wǒ xǐng lái. Wǒ qù jùyuàn. Wǒ kànhǎo de xìjù. Wǒ chī wǎncān tóng wǒ de jiātíng.

Today

八月一号:
今天，十二小时我醒来。我去剧院。 我看好的戏剧。我吃晚餐同我的家庭。
Bā yuè yī hào:
Jīntiān, shí'èr xiǎoshí wǒ xǐng lái. Wǒ qù jùyuàn. Wǒ kànhǎo de xìjù. Wǒ chī wǎncān tóng wǒ de jiātíng.

Shona:

I have several questions:

1 What do you mean by "十二小时"？

2 we often use "起床" which means to get up instead of "醒来"。

3 we often put some specific adjective istead of "好的/不好的"

4 “戏剧” itself is too general, i suggest that you use "歌剧"“戏剧”or something else.

5 "家庭" and "家人" are different, "家庭" is a unit of our society, while "家人" means the family memebers.

6 “同” structure. we use 同+somebody+do someting structure.

Based on what you want to say, I try to offer you a version:

我今天中午十二点起床，然后去剧院看了精彩的歌剧。我打算晚上同我的家人吃晚餐。

Today

八月一号:
今天，十二小时我醒来。我去剧院。 我看好的戏剧。我吃晚餐同我的家庭。
Bā yuè yī hào:
Jīntiān, shí'èr xiǎoshí wǒ xǐng lái. Wǒ qù jùyuàn. Wǒ kànhǎo de xìjù. Wǒ chī wǎncān tóng wǒ de jiātíng.

                                                                           8月1号   
今天中午十二点时我醒了，我去了剧院并且看了好看的戏剧/电影，晚上，我和家人一起吃晚餐。
ps:
      最后一句的后面还可以加一点别的语句，比如表示自己的心情的句子:这一天我过的很开心！或者写成: 晚上，我和家人一起吃晚餐，并且和家人聊了许多有趣的话题，大家都很开心，这真是有趣的一天！

Today

八月一号:
今天，十二小时我醒来。我去剧院。 我看好的戏剧。我吃晚餐同我的家庭。
Bā yuè yī hào:
Jīntiān, shí'èr xiǎoshí wǒ xǐng lái. Wǒ qù jùyuàn. Wǒ kànhǎo de xìjù. Wǒ chī wǎncān tóng wǒ de jiātíng.

八月一号：

今天，中午12点我醒来。我去剧院，看了好的戏剧，晚上我和家人一起吃晚餐。