could you help me correct my letter and comment on it? Dear Mrs Susan Brown, I have seen the advertisement on the local magazine. I am interested in this very much. I am writting to get more informat

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could you help me correct my letter and comment on it? Dear Mrs Susan Brown, I have seen the advertisement on the local magazine. I am interested in this very much. I am writting to get more information. Could you tell me the specific of the school's address and where the nearest underground station is? I wonder how many students in a class and what facilities teacher use to teach us. I would like to know if the school is open during the first week of June. What dates could I register at the school? I would love if classes last in the end of the summer. Beside the lessons at the school, what sort of leisure activities could be arranged? I would like going to the museums to have knowledge about history. In additon, could you tell me what sort of accommodation is available? Does it include hostel, food, beverage free? The last, I would like to know if the price includes the cost of accommodation?. I would welcome the opportunity of studying in your school. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Your sincerely, Hang

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could you help me correct my letter and comment on it?

Dear Mrs Susan Brown,
I have seen the advertisement * on in the local magazine. I am very much interested in this opportunity very much. I am writing to get more information.

Could you please tell me the specific of the school's address and where the nearest underground station is? I wonder how many students there are in a class and what facilities teachers use to teach us. I would like to know if the school is open during the first week of June. What dates could I register at the school? I would love if classes last in until the end of the summer.

Beside the lessons at the school, what sort of leisure activities could be arranged? I would like to go going to the museums to that have knowledge of about history. In additon, could you tell me what sort of accommodations are is available? Does it include the hostel include free food and beverages? food, beverage free? The Lastly, I would like to know if the price includes the cost of accommodation?
I would welcome the opportunity to of studying in your school. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Your Sincerely,
Hang