New York It was two summers ago, I was in New York for my honey moon. My wife and me were in New York for 8 days and later we went to Orlando ( 8 days too). It was a fantastic experience, because I li

José

New York It was two summers ago, I was in New York for my honey moon. My wife and me were in New York for 8 days and later we went to Orlando ( 8 days too). It was a fantastic experience, because I like very much United States. New York is a wonderful city, where you can do many things in only a day. It seem you feel like if you were in a film because the landscape is really beautiful. I loved Central Park, I liked set down in the gardens, where you can have a picnic and to see many people while they are walking or doing any sport. At night, the park is fantastic because there are many performance, mostly in summer. I loved China Town, Brookling´s bridge, Wall Street, Empire, Time´s Square and 5th. Avenue. It´s a enormous and fantastic city, I have recomended my friends many times. Best regards!

Aug 1, 2014 4:43 AM

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Great Job José!

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New York

It was two summers ago and I was in New York for my honeymoon. My wife and me I were in New York for 8 eight [better for a formal piece] days and later we went to Orlando ( 8 days too) [for a similar period]. It was a fantastic experience, because I like very much the United States very much / ["a lot"].

New York is a wonderful city, where you can do many ["a lot of" is used more in this context] things in only a single day. It seem you feel like if you were It feels like you are in a film because the landscape is really beautiful.

I loved Central Park I liked set down in the gardens and enjoyed sitting down in the gardens where you can have a picnic and to see many people while they are walking or doing any sport. At night, the park is fantastic because there are many performances, mostly in summer.

I loved China Town, Brookling´s The Brooklyn bridge, Wall Street, The Empire State Building, Times´s Square and 5th./Fifth Avenue. It´s a enormous and fantastic city and I have recomended it to my friends many times.

Best regards!