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Tyrant Only until recently, I have been heard of a well-received TV series, called Tyrant. The protagonist, Bassam Al Fayeed, who prefer to be called Barry, is the younger son of the notorious dictator of a fictional Arab country of Abbudin. Feeling stifled, he had run away from his family for ages. But now, he had to return with his American families for his newphew’s wedding. The show is full of clashes and the storyline is not as predictable as most TV series. The actor in the show always tries his best to persuade his brother to act as a reasonable and less violent political figure. His brother, the newly president, was analogous to a lion, while he was refered to the liontamer. It Is an exact mix of self-loathing and righteousness in the character. The hero, played by Adam Rayner, perfectly portrayed the twist and sophistication that the part requires. Although I have to confess, apart from the great demonstration of the cast, the reason I love this show is that Adam Rayner is cute and sexy in a very special way.
Aug 1, 2014 4:46 AM
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Tyrant

Only Until recently, I have been heard (I heard) of a well-received TV series, called Tyrant. The protagonist, Bassam Al Fayeed, who prefer(s) to be called Barry, is the younge(st) son of the notorious dictator of a fictional Arab country of Abbudin. Feeling stifled, he had run (ran) away from his family, for ages (ages ago). But now, he had to return with (for) his American family's for his nephew’s wedding. The show is full of clashes and the storyline is not as predictable as most TV series. The actor in the show always tries his best to persuade his brother to act as a reasonable and less violent political figure. His brother, the newly (elected) president, was (is) analogous (similar) to a lion, while he was refered to (as) the liontamer.

It Is an exact mix of self-loathing and righteousness in the character. The hero, played by Adam Rayner, perfectly portray(s) the twist and sophistication that the part requires. Although I have to confess, apart from the great demonstration (acting) of the cast, the reason I love this show is that Adam Rayner is cute and sexy in a very special way.

 

**This was really good! The highlighted words: I think you could use different words, that are more commonly heard.

 

Analogous - To have an analogy. You could use "similar"

Twist - Is an action. You would refer to the "twist", in tv shows, movies and books, as unexpected or a surprise. So I don't know what your trying to say about his acting. 

Demonstartion - Usually you would just say "acting". 

 

*** This tv show sounds really good, I'm checking it out, thanks :)

August 1, 2014
Is there anyone who could help me with the correction? Tks -_-''
August 1, 2014
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