Valentin
What Happened Today. Today I had wake up earlier than usually. Even though it is my holiday and did not have to go to work I needed to bring my car to a garage for a regular maintenance service. I booked the visit at 7:30 because I would rather finish this business quickly and do not wast whole holiday for waiting a car in a garage. I think I was the first customer who showed up at the place immediately after the gate was opened. The car maintenance operation took less than two hours, while during this time I enjoyed reading my next English book in a waiting room. I think it was worth getting up earlier as at 09:30 I had my car serviced and ready for the next 15000 kilometers run, I benefited with one hour of amusing reading and I even managed to get back home to get breakfast with my family. PS: This is my seventh notebook entry on this week. So I have to admit that It's written mostly out of commitment to keep on my writing for seven days. Anyway I tried to use new expressions and words.
Aug 1, 2014 11:55 AM
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What Happened Today.

Today, I had (to) wake up earlier than usually. Even though it('s) my holiday and (I) did(n't) have to go to work, I needed to bring my car to (the) garage for a regular maintenance service. I booked the visit (car) at for 7:30 because I would rather finish this business quickly and do not wast(e) (my) whole holiday for waiting a (for) (my) car in (the) garage. I think I was the first customer who showed up, at the place immediately after the gate was opened. The car maintenance operation took less than two hours, while during this time I enjoyed reading my next English book in (the) waiting room. I think it was worth getting up earlier, as at 09:30 I had my car serviced and ready for the next 15000 kilometers run. I benefited with (It was benefical, because I had) one hour of amusing reading and I even managed to get back home to get breakfast with my family.

PS: This is my seventh notebook entry on this week. So I have to admit that It's written mostly out of commitment to keep on my writing for seven days. Anyway I tried to use new expressions and words.

 

**Car Maintenance Operation >>>>>>Car Serivce or Service.

It depends where in the world you go, but in Australia we would just say "service" or "car service".

same with "regular maintenance service" we would just say "regular service".

 

 

P.s.s Great work! I wish I could write Korean as well as you write in English :) 

August 1, 2014
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