Change or Not

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change.Others,however,think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


With the development of society, we have more choices in our lives than (ever) before. Faced with these choices, people's attitudes are different.Some people like change (and) the others are opposite (don't).Overall,I firmly harbor the perspective that change is good.

Initially,the world is in constant development and change, we should keep up with the pace of the development of human civilization.(We should keep pace with the development of human civilisation). For example, a few years ago,the mobile phone can not (couldn't) surf (/or/ browse) the Internet, but along with the proliferantion (proliferation) of the Internet, more and more functions can be realized (utilised) by mobile phone's. Now the smartphone is widely used.If you refuse to accept the mobile phone which has new functions and insist on the us(ing) (an) old version,it will eventually be eliminated.The advent of new technology make(s) our life easier and enhance(s) (our) efficiency (in) work and study.

Moreover,change can certainly add novelty value (to our) lives.In the other words,change is instructive and can nurture imagination.It is easy to make people feel tired and under presure that live or work in a fixed place (/or/destination).Travel is a way (to) change, which is very popular recently.People can get relaxed and (be) entertained when they travel to other place(s), so that they can better (integrate) into work or study when they came back (return).Change makes life full of passion.

However,it must be mentioned that some meaningful culture traditionals also can not be abandoned or easily to changed.It is closely interrelated with our national identity and (this) value and can promote the harmony between ethnic group(s) (/or/ identities).

In any case,different people have different attitudes towards life, it is important to follow your own heart.Change or not,(it) depends on your own (perspective).

**whoa! awesome!! Most of my corrections were about substituting basic words, for more complex ones. Since throughout your entry your use some big words, so I wanted to keep it the same throughtout. 

***Novelty value to our lives >>>>>>Novelty and value in this context mean similar things. You only need one, not both. Novelty is more related to fun. Whereas "adding value to our lives" sounds better. 

Change or Not

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change.Others,however,think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


With the development of society, we have more choices in our lives than before. Faced with these choices, people's attitudes are different.Some people like change, the others are opposite.Overall,I firmly harbor the perspective that change is good.

Initially,the world is in constant development and change, we should keep up with the pace of the development of human civilization.For example, a few years ago,the mobile phone can not surf the Internet, but along with the proliferantion of the Internet, more and more functions can be realized by mobile phone.Now the smartphone is widely used.If you refuse to accept the mobil phone which has new functions and insist on the use of old version,it will eventually be eliminated.The advent of new technology make our life easier and enhance efficiency of work and study.

Moreover,change can certainly adds novelty value of life.In the other words,change is instructive and can nurture imagination.It is easy to make people feel tired and under presure that live or work in a fixed place.Travel is a way of change which is very popular recently.People can get relaxed and entertained when they travel to other place,so that they can better into work or study when they came back.Change makes life full of passion.

However,it must be mentioned that some meaningful culture traditionals also can not be abandoned or easily to changed.It is closely interrelated with our national identity and value and can promote the harmony between ethnic group.

In any case,different people have different attitudes towards life, it is important to follow your own heart.Change or not,depends on your own.

Nice topic Rodin.

I totally agree with u, change is necessary. And for me I can't swork for more than 2 yes.