Hector
I WILL BE THE BLACK STALLION !!! Today was the last day in the first month of my new job, well it's the first time to have a real job, i work as a Tele-sales agent, and i lack experience. During training i showed the most promise and i was the best, but when we started dialing customers, i became the biggest upset, everybody thought that i would be the Top-achiever of the new comers and the junior agents. Well now i am the worst new comer, but i have the potential to be the best, my coach and manager are believing in me, or i am not sure if they do after what i have done. The bad results were not because i was bad, well i was the best on the phone, but even my coach said: Hector i can't really understand you, u do everything right still u get no sales !!! My coach was confused so was I, may be we can say that i had a hard luck, BUT !! i made a promise that i will make the BIGGEST comeback in the history of my company and the i will be the black stallion. Tomorrow will be my first day at the second month and i will grind and i' ll do everything i can to achieve my goal. Please if u can help me in this, i will be so thankful, i am so ambitious and i want to dominate my working floor !!! Cheeeers !!! ^^
Aug 2, 2014 4:27 AM
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I WILL BE THE BLACK STALLION !!!

Today was the last day in the first month of my new job, well it's the first time I've had a real job, I work as a Tele-sales agent, and I lack experience.
During training I showed the most promise and I was the best, but when we started dialing customers, I became the biggest dissapointment, everybody thought that I would be the Top achiever of the newcomers and the junior agents.
Well now i am the worst newcomer, but I have the potential to be the best, my coach and manager  believe in me, but I am not sure if they do after what I have done.
The bad results were not because I was bad, I was the best on the phone, but even my coach said, "Hector I can't really understand you, you do everything right still you get no sales!!!"
My coach was confused and so was I.  Maybe we can say that I had bad luck, BUT!! I made a promise that i will make the BIGGEST comeback in the history of my company and that I will be the black stallion.
Tomorrow will be my first day of the second month and I will grind (I'm not sure what you mean by grind, message me) and I'll do everything I can to achieve my goal.
Please if you can help me in/(with) this, I will be so thankful. I am so ambitious and I want to dominate my working floor !!!
Cheeeers !!! ^^

August 2, 2014
I did my best helping correcting,your English is quite good... BUT,what I really want to say is....CHEER UP! you know chances are for those who are prepared.You've proved yourself to be the best in the training,you are still the best of all.believe me,maybe you just meet up with some troubles in the first steps... Everyone has ups and downs,those setbacks will make you better and stronger! Best wishes, Jolina
August 2, 2014

I WILL BE THE BLACK STALLION !!!

Today was (is) the last day in(of) the first month of my new job, well it's the first time to have a real job, i work as a Tele-sales agent, and i lack experience.
During training i showed the most promise(I made the biggest promise)and i was the best, but when we started dialing customers, i became the biggest upset most upset person, everybody thought that i would be the Top-achiever of the new comers and the junior agents.
Well now i am the worst new comer, but i have the potential to be the best, my coach and manager are believing in me(have faith in), or(but) i am not sure if they do after what i have done.
The bad results were not because i was bad, well i was the best on the phone, but even my coach said: Hector i can't really understand you, u do everything right still u get no sales !!!
My coach was confused so was I, may be we can say that i had a hard(bad) luck, BUT !! i made a promise that i will make the BIGGEST comeback in the history of my company and the i will be the black stallion.
Tomorrow will be my first day atof) the second month and i will grind and i' ll do everything i can to achieve my goal.
Please if u can help me in this, i will be so thankful, i am so ambitious and i want to dominate my working floor !!!
Cheeeers !!! ^^

August 2, 2014
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