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The instruction from your recently mistake. Hi my name is Hong Gyu Kim :). I've tried to prepare for English interview these days. The title is one of the interview's question. The following is my answer. If you find something wrong, please let me know. thanks :) What I thought I mistake something is nothing among what I've done. Whenever the result is, I've tried to get somthing and accepted it as growing up not mistake. Once hearing your question, one thing come to my mind. There is an woman who I really love, We have gotten along with each other but I had to enter into the army. When it was what a man calls 일말상초(this is the period when many soldiers are broken up with her girlfriends). I broke up with my girlfriend. For the first time, I really resented her. But I cannot be helped but recognizing my faults while the time passes. I didn't know I need to be wait and respect for our valuable people. During the remaining one year in the army, I've lived my life with carrying it on my mind. Whenever I meet with any people in the future, I've lived always with this mind. Since I'm embarassed about it, I cannot have a word concretely. But to be honest with you I made dozens of phone calls to her and spout out some harsh remarks which I should not tell her with angry when she didn't receive my phone call. The critical point before everything is that I couldn't respect her as my lovely woman and a person. Since I get trauma at that moment, I very intensly have tried to respect other people whenever I meet with them. I respect myself as much as the next person so I always make a spell saying that they are the same people with me who have lived their own life very enthusiastically like me. If I get take the job of your company in the future, I not only must do the best on doing my own work but also have many occasions to meet with other people. I have a confident to repect them as one person whoever I meet with. The heartbreaking occasion changed me very greatly and then I've tried during all that long time.
Aug 2, 2014 6:19 AM
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The instruction from your recently mistake.

Hi my name is Hong Gyu Kim :). I've tried to prepare for English interview these days. The title is one of the interview's question. The following is my answer. If you find something wrong, please let me know. thanks :)

That's a fact, most of our instructions in life came from the mistakes we've made.  When I heard your question, one thing came to my mind. There is an woman whom I really love. We get along well but the thing is I had to go and serve the army. We have this thing called 일말상초(this is the period when many soldiers split up with her girlfriends). When it was time for me to do that. For the first time, I really resented her. But I cant help to think about the thing that I've done as the time passed. I didn't know If I should continue serving my country. During my last year in the army, I've lived my days thinking about it. 

I don't want to talk about it really. There was a time when I made dozens of phone calls to her and  spout out some harsh remarks when she wasn't answering my phone calls. I know I shouldn't have done that because I realized that she is the woman I love and I should respect her. Since I got traumatized at that moment, I pushed myself hard to respect all the people around me. I respect them as much as I respect myself.

If I get the chance to work in your company, I will not only give my best but I will respect all the people that  I have to deal with in the future. As the saying goes, respect begets respect.  And respect is the most important thing in creating a harmonious working environment and with harmonious working environment comes great productivity and you get to go to work not only looking forward to the things that you're gonna do for the day but also the people you get to do these things with. 

 

 

 

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I spiced it up a little bit. I hope this will get you your job! :D

August 2, 2014
Can you elaborate or explain more the first sentence?
August 2, 2014
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