nicole_200
你好 italki 你好 italki, 我叫 妮可。我二十六岁。我来英国 和 我说话法语。我学汉语。我工作星期一到星期五,我学晚上和周末。今天天气很热。今天你怎么样?
Aug 3, 2014 12:00 PM
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Here are some notes (not everything) to hopeful help you. Be aware the you will be "corrected" when you didn't make a mistake.

 

If you want to say "I come from England/Britain/the UK", say 我来自英国. 来自 means "to come from", whereas 来 is just "to come".

If you want to say "I am English/British", you can say 我是英国人 - Literally, I-am-Britain-person.

 

You used 和 to mean "and", but this not used for linking sentences.

 

说话 means "to speak", but it's a verb+object (literally, speak+words), as you have an object ("Chinese"), you swap it for 话.

I guess you wanted to say "I can speak Chinese", so can say 我会说汉语. 会 means "can" (referring to a skill that's been learnt)

 

When you have a time word (or phrase in your case) and a verb, put the time word first, so it should be "I - Monday to Friday - work", and the same with the sentence after.

August 3, 2014
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August 23, 2014
你好 italki, 我叫 妮可。我二十六岁。我来自(zi)英国 , 我会说(hui shuo)法语。我在(zai)学汉语。我星期一到星期五工作,我晚上和周末学习。今天天气很热。今天你怎么样呢(ne)?
August 5, 2014

你好 italki

你好 italki, 我叫 妮可。我二十六岁。我来英国 和 我说话法语。我学汉语。我工作星期一到星期五,我学晚上和周末。今天天气很热。今天你怎么样?

 

大家好,我叫妮可,我今年二十六岁,我来自英国,我会说法语。我在学汉语,我星期一到星期五工作,我想在晚上和周末学,今天天气很热。今天你好吗?

August 3, 2014
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