My Dream.

Well, I have been thinking about what to write here but I don't know what to write. (have been thinking should be used because it shows that you were thinking in the past and you are still thinking about it.) My dream is to travel to South Korea. I love the K-Pop idols there! However, I am unsure as to whether it will be an easy place to live. Despite that, I still hope that I can live my dream and travel there!

Thank you for your kind attention!

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My Dream

Well, I thought about what to write here and I don't know exactly what to write.
My dream is to visit South Korea. I love many (idols?) that live there. But not only because this. South Korea is a country that is very beautiful. And it would be fun to live there. 
But, this is my dream and one day I will be able to accomplish it.
Thank you, 

My Dream

Well, I thought about what to write here and  I don't know exactly what to write.
My dream is to visit traveling to South Korea. I love many of the idols that live  living there. It is not only because of them though.  But don't is only because this. The South Korea is a very beautiful country, very beautiful. and it would be easy living there. Or perhaps not.
But, this is my dream and one day I go will be able to accomplish it.
Thank you for your attention.

My Dream

Well, i thought about what to write here and I didn't know exactly what to write.
My dream is to travel to South Korea. I love many idols that living there. But it is not just because of this. The South Korea is a country very beautiful. And it would be easy living there. Or not.
But, this is my dream and one day I'm going to be able to accomplish it.
Thank you for your attention